Pokemon Special! 1st Series: RBYG

Started by Luis Kazuya November 12th, 2004 3:39 AM
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Luis Kazuya

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Age 32
SomeWhere in tHe GloBe *i Think?*
Seen October 10th, 2017
Posted February 17th, 2006
396 posts
18.6 Years
Episode 1: Red and his 1st day
*Lights Shining*
Nidorino- Nido!!
Gengar- Gen... GAR!!
Announcer-Wow! Gengar is doing a delibrate Night Shade! And POOF! Nidorino is down. What would Fernando use next?
Fernando- Go Tauros!
*Fernando opens POKEball* *Tauros came out in a FLASH*
Tauros-Taur! ROSS!
Announcer-Tauros moved in for a THRASH! But alas, Gengar moved out of harm's way and OH! It's a shadow ball! The battle is over!......

Red'sMum- Your night's over too. Better go to sleep, Young MAN!
Red-Right after Prof.'s Great Speech!
Red's Mum-U BETTER!
*Slams door behind her*
Red-Alright!

#Red is now ten years old. Back in his hometown in KANTO, Pallet, ten ear old youngsters can start on their official quest in becoming a POKEMON MASTER. Red's biggest wish is to be able to conquer all of the gyms. On the other hand, Blue, his best rival, is going to be back from his training in JOHTO. With his pokemon, Sneasel and Scyther by his side, he knew he could beat Blue.#

*MORNING*
Red(IN HIS DREAMS)-The starters are Charmander... and erm... erm... ya Bulbasaur. And also Squirtleeee... ... Squirtle is jumpy and cute. Prefers strong and abllleee trrrainnners... Wait.. Charmander is strong a skillllfulll... ... And Bulbbbbbaaasa.. aaaurrr... It is greattt for startttttti...... ting train....ers.......
*Fearow and Dodrio crows loudly!*
Red-ARGH!
*Red Jumppeedd!*
Red-OMG!*stares avidly at the clock* It's afternoon already! *runs to the laboratory of Professor Oak*
Red-Proffessor!*Red opens the door abruptly*Do you still have any left!?
Oak-Ah...... Red. Hi! Erm... *stares at Red's outfit* Are you still in dreamland?
Red-Of course not! Do you still have at least one starter for me?
Oak-Oh.. There is one more of the three... But...
Red-Give me that!
Oak-I have to break it to you, it is not so perfect. It is tempemental, mental should be the word.
Red-Cemon! I already is a mental since I am late!
Oak-Alright... Since you are so serious... *Opens a leaf labled button* This is it...
#Light flashes and a shape starts to grow form as Red watched anticipately.#
Bulbasaur- Bu.... Bulba!
Red-It's .... PERFECT! A bulbasaur!
Oak-This is really....
*Bulbasaur uses RAZOR LEAF*
Red- ARH! Why did it... Hitt.. Meeee...*Falls to ground*
Oak-Told you it was mental..
Red-I got a way. *Opens POKEball*
Sneasel-SNEA!
Red-Icy Wind!*Sneasel uses ICY WIND on Bulbasaur. Bulbasaur turned into ICE*
Oak-U froze it. But what can ya do on it?
Red-Dunno!
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Episode 2 Synopsis: Red still got a long way in calming Bulbasaur's mental problem. Blue meets Red and battled Red. In the midst, Red finally became fast friends with Bulbasaur and conquered his weakness of humans and defeated Blue's Psyduck and Porygon. With that Blue uses his fast Charmeleon, fighting against Bulbasaur. Will Red win? Find out in next episode, 2:Red VS Blue
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Frostweaver

Ancient + Prehistoric

Age 34
Male
Canada
Seen September 11th, 2016
Posted July 30th, 2016
8,246 posts
19.7 Years
improperly written scriptfics... let's not even bother putting up the marks system.

Refer to Yamato-san's scriptfic. Now that one was written properly. You need to have stage directions (there is just NONE here), and many other aspects to make a proper scriptfic. Also, when the fanfic's plot is so anime-like, that isn't a good thing at all...

Ryoutarou

Seen April 2nd, 2023
Posted December 29th, 2020
30,927 posts
19.3 Years
0.0 Even I never wrote anything like this...Uh, anyways it seems like a big copy of the first episode, you have little to no description, most of the people seem like they are just copys of ash,his mother, and of course Oak...Script fic's are written out better like Yamato-San's fic was.