Spirit of the Wolf

Started by Claire November 12th, 2004 2:26 PM
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This is a poem i wrote tonight...I know..i never write poems XD
It's basically the lessons to learn from wolves, about family, friends, and staying strong
The verse in brackets is kinda one i thought up, but doesnt go as well with the flow of the poem.


Spirit of the Wolf

Hunter by day, wanderer by night,
Follow me friend as we pass the stars' light.
My silver coat gleams, my eyes shine bright,
With confidence unshattering, so fear my might.

Freedom of the eagle, the strength of the bear,
The wisdom of the dolphin, and a soul filled with care.
All of these features and never alone:
My pack is my family, my life, my home,

And i am the leader, the alpha of all,
I will protect you if you heed my call.
Run with us, hunt with us, have no fear,
For if you are hurt, we are always near.

(The night is our lover for evermore,
With the moon as our guardian -an unspoken law.
Our respect never wavers as time goes on
So join us, dear friend, in our moonward song)

I ask you, sweet stranger, to never forget
To always have courage and never once fret.
So when you are scared that you may not win through
Just look through my eyes: find the wolf inside you.

Kyosuke

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That was nice Claire, in a way it tells you how important friends can be if you get yourself in something, but reversed with wolves. I really did like it.
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It's good, if a little too "sweet" for my taste. XD o_O Blue and you are siblings?


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HO-LY EFFING CHEESE FRIES! Claire, I am serious when I say this: that poem was pehaps the best I have ever read anywhere! I promise this is no lie, seeing as I adore wolves above all else, this poem literally made me cry!! X3 I give your poem a full 10/10!! *glomps* Great work Claire, you did an awsome job!

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