Countryemo's Poems

Started by countryemo June 24th, 2010 11:38 AM
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countryemo

Kicking against the earth!

Age 29
Male
Littleroot Town
Seen February 9th, 2021
Posted September 10th, 2018
2,367 posts
13.5 Years
The Two Paths
Spoiler:
Dark, Light, Illusion, Blind.

The Two Paths Of Dark,

And Light. The One You

Choose, Chooses Your

Demise


This came to mind a year or two ago while I was sitten outside lol. Enjoy

Where Im From
Spoiler:
I am from small days and big dreams to empty minds and massive knowledge.

I am from good friends and mean biggies to allies and enemies.

I am from the top of the hill in Issaquah shielded by many types of big
tress and grown maple leafs, filled with many surprises every time,
Awakened by the shining daylight

I am from Brittany Spears and police sirens to dark rooms and jammie
shirt rolls. From a small road with a rounded endm with friends all
around.

I am from homemade waterslides and relaxed evening hammocks with
Lucky wagging his tail to toy filles filled rooms and electric fun.

I am from music playing to paper and colors. From yellow bears and
television creatures to the african animals and moving cars with a home inside.

I am from a Pokémon game and a Game Boy next to me, and a box of cards in my room. From cheating and lying which I was raised


This poem was an english assigment. Some said it was good, and I hope youll enjoy this too. This is about me, with probely some stuff made up.

countryemo

Kicking against the earth!

Age 29
Male
Littleroot Town
Seen February 9th, 2021
Posted September 10th, 2018
2,367 posts
13.5 Years
Thanks. Yea I thought it was tricky to read too. Where im from is basicly a story of my life. I would recamend anyone to try one.
I rememberd I had more poems so Ill share them :)

Unfading love
Spoiler:
I known you since third grade
I had love for you since then
Now we're in ninth grade
And we're not with each other
My love for you should of faded
But yet it hasent, i love you so
do you still love me?


The Day That Never Should Have Happend
Spoiler:
One day we met. By the end of the school year, i'll never forget all the great memorys that we had. I thought that I would never see you again, since I had to move away. We nevr got to say good bye. I thought about you all the time. I wished I could see you again. I waited, no sign of you. I started to cry. But than I thought, even though I might never see you again, you will always be my best friend. Around 5 years later, I saw a person I guessed it was anougher new student that i dident know. But than she came up to me, and asked my name. I dident know what to say, but then I rememberd it was her. I finnaly answered, when i did, we both got a smile on our faces. We dident really hang out much, even though we were in the same class togather almost all day long.But torwards the end of the year, me and her got to be friends again.
Age 29
Male
Seen October 13th, 2021
Posted February 2nd, 2017
1,093 posts
13.8 Years
Unfading Love - Again short, but it explains everything. Actually, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And yet, what style of poetry did you use?
The Day That Never Should Have Happened - It tells a very good story. But the flaw is, it doesn't seem to be a poem.

There are a few typos and spelling errors in these poems and your previous ones. You should probably fix them.

countryemo

Kicking against the earth!

Age 29
Male
Littleroot Town
Seen February 9th, 2021
Posted September 10th, 2018
2,367 posts
13.5 Years
(Glad some one likes them :D)

Unfading love- Umm Idk I just write them? ..

The day- I know its not much of a poem but oh well i guess, not everything can be great.

Typo's and spelling mistakes? where o.o