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Old April 28th, 2010 (4:10 PM). Edited June 26th, 2010 by tylerab01.
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    It is finally your time to shine! You have been recruited by Professor Elm to help him with a task that will take you all over the world of Pokemon. You will travel through the Johto, Kanto, Hoenn, and the NEW Melodie Region! You will take on many task that will prove to the world you are a Pokemon Master!

    You will travel through each Region completing a different test than heroes before you! Playing as Ethan/Lyra from HG/SS

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    In the Melodie Region Copy Cat girl has oppend a store called Copy This! Here you can buy costumes and such.

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    There will be boy and girl features so that events made for girls and events for boys do not get mixed up. This will also be used for the Copy This Clothing Store.

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    Old April 28th, 2010 (8:54 PM).
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      Ok, let's get started.

      First, I like the name. It's pretty unique. I absolutely love the fakemon evolution for Lapras as well. It looks gorgeous.

      Secondly, the story... well, to be blunt, it sucks. It's poorly written, doesn't tell us anything at all, and is very vague about anything other than being regional champion. It sounds like it will end up just like every other Pokemon game. Is English a second language for you? If so, I recommend getting someone on the team who is fluent in it and can check / write the dialogue in events for you.

      Thirdly, I love the idea of Copy This! Kudos as it is a unique way to implement costuming into the game. Have you decided on if you are just going to do different trainer sprites, or are you going to put in fully fledged costumes? Such as Mummy, Darcula, Pumpkin, etc?

      Finally, do you have anything else planned for features? If your story line is lacking, and you don't have many features, it will be hard to differentiate your game from the originals. That means that it probably won't attract as much attention as you hope.

      Hope any of that helped.~
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      Old April 29th, 2010 (6:36 AM).
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        Yes english is a second language but I basicly taught it to myself, and I will work on the story line.

        The only thing about the costumes is that it is going to be trainer sprites I think but Ill do some creative ones for Mystery Gifts etc.
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        Old April 29th, 2010 (6:51 AM).
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          I can always help out if you want. Just ask. I think every game should be given a chance to get off the ground.

          Mystery Gift scripts could be a good idea... You could release them at different times for people to download and do. It would be a surprise; like, Christmas and Halloween costumes too. It would extend the playtime of the game as well as replay value. I would say that the next thing you need to work on is getting up some screen shots. Either done by yourself, or from someone helping you. In-game, character models, sprites. Anything.

          Eye candy is always useful for game promotion.
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          Old April 30th, 2010 (1:10 PM).
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            I just added screenshots!
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            Old April 30th, 2010 (8:38 PM).
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              I want to help but since my trial ran out on me can I just suggest ideas?
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              Old May 1st, 2010 (2:41 AM).
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                I want to help but since my trial ran out on me can I just suggest ideas?
                There are plenty of Keygens that make it so that the program registers you as owning it. Google it and find out.

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                I just added screenshots!
                So far, nice screenshots. Only having one in-game screenshot, and with not much going on, I can't really comment on the style yet. The sprites, however, look very nice. Still, they could use a little work. The outline for Aaron seems a bit fuzzy, and Stevie's face needs more detail. Other than that, though, you're starting off quite nicely.
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                Old May 1st, 2010 (2:55 AM).
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                  I'm fairly certain you took your 'Stevie' from deviantART....
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                  Old May 1st, 2010 (5:15 AM).
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                    thanks i am using what resources i have atm but im getting my photoshop license today
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                    Old May 1st, 2010 (9:51 AM).
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                      Firstly, I love the name, it's original, yet follows the same style of the Pokémon game remakes. The story is... pitiful. The PokéDex assignment makes sense, however, its very boring; maybe you could add a bit of back story? Why did the Professor ask the two heroes to partake in the assignment? I think you get the idea, it might be Pokémon, which mostly makes no sense, but I doubt the Professor would just randomly pick two children to do an assignment for him. The part about the Giovanni and Cyrus makes no sense from what I read, for the assignment do you have to beat those two? Its the impression I'm getting.

                      "...in the quest to save the Melodie Region." I thought the quest was to fill the PokeDex? You get my point. Finally, "...never before seen features", I don't see any 'never before seen features' on the post, so maybe you could actually give use proof to back up your claim, other wise its hollow.

                      The screenshot is abysmally bad, and gives your pretty good thread a bad point. Its just a wooded grid, two houses and a road. How could you class that as a screenshot? I'm not trying to be nasty, but if you want the users to post (who are mostly 12 on this site), than you need pretty pictures and not two houses.

                      The Copy This! feature seems promising, I wouldn't class it as new, as costumes have already been added to the official Nintendo games. However, what I don't understand is the use. Costumes for what? - are they overworld clothing, or costumes for contests? Please elaborate.

                      Finally, the PokeCentre updates seem promising, but you might want to elaborate further (or actually elaborate).

                      So overall, the game looks promising, but so far, I'm not really seeing any reason to play the game, it seems like just another game on this site that looks promising, but once you get to play it, is crap.
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                      Old May 1st, 2010 (4:17 PM).
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                        SO.... the costumes will be overworld costumes, i will elaborate more on the story line and post better screenshots! Thanks for the input
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                        Old May 6th, 2010 (6:44 AM). Edited May 6th, 2010 by tylerab01.
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                          Ok so I will be working on some of the Screenshots this Weekend, I am trying to get the dual screen script to work and If you know how to get this to work please help this is what I need help with.

                          - Setting a picture with the title screen only
                          - In Game Screen
                          - Mouse Pointer to work

                          I want to soon add a new code for the PokeDex but i need to get this screen to work first and so I can start posting quality screenshots. Please help if you can you can also chat with me on msn: [email protected]

                          I hope you guys are still following me!

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                          I'm fairly certain you took your 'Stevie' from deviantART....
                          I did get 'stevie' from deviantart but this is temporary I am going to work on her later. She will be added to the events after mapping and the story events, but thanks for calling me out on that, i forgot to mention it was temporary and that i got it from deviantart!

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                          I want to help but since my trial ran out on me can I just suggest ideas?
                          Sure there is a keygen on youtube it works but i would not suggest getting it, but yes you can suggest ideas.

                          I was able to get the support bars on the thread! Please add the bar to your signature and more will be on the way!
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                          Old May 11th, 2010 (9:01 AM).
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                            You cannot use the lapras evo as it's designer has strict rules.
                            He/She states that the sprites cannot be used by anyone except himself/herself and Pokemon Torzach.
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                            Old May 11th, 2010 (4:53 PM).
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                              Ok I contacted the owner and I am waiting for a responce :p
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                                Ok I contacted the owner and I am waiting for a responce :p
                                I'm afraid I would be strongly against you using my pokemon, it would ruin the originality for both my hack and your game. Ami and me agreed on me being the only one using them. Sorry!
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                                  I'm afraid I would be strongly against you using my pokemon, it would ruin the originality for both my hack and your game. Ami and me agreed on me being the only one using them. Sorry!

                                  Owned! Lol but GL on ure game
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                                  Old May 14th, 2010 (4:30 PM).
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                                    I'm afraid I would be strongly against you using my pokemon, it would ruin the originality for both my hack and your game. Ami and me agreed on me being the only one using them. Sorry!
                                    No Problem dude, I will use another pokemon and It will not change the game much at all, Now all I need to do it work on the title screen :p
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                                    Old May 19th, 2010 (2:44 PM).
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                                      Ok! Were do i begin.... Well since I am starting to get into hardcore mapping I am now just realizing that I need a region map!! I started to make the map in photoshop but I failed epicly, so I was wondering if somebody could make the map????

                                      If you are willing please post the map here and I shall use it!


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                                      Old May 19th, 2010 (5:13 PM). Edited May 20th, 2010 by maaddogg.
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                                        cool game, i would love too see more
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                                        Old May 21st, 2010 (7:52 PM).
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                                          Ok you can now find the Pokemon EmberMelody & AquaHarmony updates and stuff on my website! http://uzumaki-studios.co.uk

                                          Just register and you will be on your way
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                                            Characters look cool... keep working at it!
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                                            Old May 24th, 2010 (6:29 AM).
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                                              ANNOUNCEMENT!!

                                              I am going on summer break this thursday so I will be working on this project more. I am trying to get started on screenshots but I do not ever get to that point before i have to leave for school or work, but i will post them sometime today!
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                                              Old May 25th, 2010 (12:25 PM). Edited June 20th, 2010 by parallelzero.
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                                                Hi! I'm willing to make your map for you I just need to know what the map looks like. :)
                                                I have somebody already but thanks!

                                                OK!!!!

                                                I havent been on in for ever! I got so wrapped up in working on a CMS that I forgot to work on my game :(

                                                Please give me some slack because i am working on the game and coding some sort of trading system with my website and the game!

                                                http://uzumaki-studios.co.uk !!!! THE OFFICIAL HOME OF POKEMON EM/AH

                                                HOORAY!! I finally got my screenies posted!!!! :p Ill be posting more soon!!!!

                                                I need a Coder/scripter and a Mapper!!!

                                                THE FIRST SCREENSHOT IS NOT CORRECT!!!! THAT IS FOR POKEMON EMBERMELODY!!! I am workin gon Pokemon AquaHarmony!!
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                                                  single tile paths = no

                                                  i do like how you made the hometown layout quite a bit different from usual though. you know, your house and rivals house right above the lab lmao
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                                                    I'm looking at the story right now and its very bland. It's the same as every other game but you've managed to strip out all the neat stuff. I'm somewhat disappointed but then it is in the drawing board so you can still add to it which I recommend. How about adding a twist? Maybe in the intro? Or in the end?
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