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Originally Posted by abdur_23
Hey, so, I am fairly new to competitive battling, so this team might suck hard, but here they are. :)
Tyranitar w???
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Sand Stream
Moves:
Crunch
EQ
Stone Edge
Fire Punch
EV's: 252 Atk, 252 Speed
Lucario w/Expert Belt
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
Moves:
Dark Pulse
Aura Sphere
Dragon Pulse
Psychic
EV's: 252 Sp. Atk, 252 Speed, 4 HP
Swampert w/Leftovers
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Torrent
Moves:
Hammer Arm
Stone Edge
EQ
Waterfall
EVs: 252 HP, 252 Atk, 4 Def
Metagross w/Occa Berry
Nature: Hardy
Ability: Clear Body
Moves:
Thunderpunch
Zen Headbutt
Rock Slide
Ice Punch
EVs: 252 Atk, 228 Speed, 28 HP
Dragonite w/ Yache Berry
Nature: Naughty
Ability: Inner Focus
Moves:
Fire Punch
Outrage
Thunderpunch
Dragon Dance
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Speed, 4 HP
Electivire w/ Shuca Berry
Nature:Adamant
Ability: Motor Drive
Moves:
EQ
Thunderpunch
Ice Punch
Magnet Rise
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Speed, 4 HP
Please rate my team constructively. If you need more info, I'd be glad to provide it. :)
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first and foremost, you gotta remove the reducing berries. Electivire likes expert belt, dragonite would like LO (life orb) and metagross with lum berry instead.
this looks like a pure offensive beatdown style kind of team, given that every pokemon you posted all have attacks and no support WHATSOEVER. so im gonna try and help with that. do you know if you are going to use this team for Wifi battles or for shoddy?
Tyranitar loves being adamant nature to abuse that monstrous atk stat, but jolly works too if your looking to outspeed things, but i believe its going to fall short on OHKOs, so Choice Band as an item would help, and switching out Fire Punch to pursuit, loads of things are deathly afraid of tyranitar, so nabbing them on the switch is going to hurt
oh boy, a special lucario ^^; you gotta drop psychic and dark pulse, in favor for shadow ball and vacuum wave. dragon pulse isn't going to be doing much either, so just have close combat in case you face off a blissey. Hidden power ice works wonders here, as its your counter for when Gliscor comes in to ruin your parade.
Swampert could use a tad bit of work, and is going to be your lead on this team, since tyranitar can be saved for late game beatdowns. Hammer Arm is a terrible move on the mudfish IMO so stealth rocks are a must, as it will help lower your opponent's health to KO range. you can keep stone edge, but you might want to consider placing roar for shuffling and checking out the rest of your opponents pokemon. also you might want to take a few EVs out of atk to place in defense, it takes physical hits extremely well.
Metagross is an awesome sweeper, but your not gonna be doing much with that set. Meteor Mash > Zen Headbutt because of the chance to raise atk 1 stage. Tpunch is kinda redundant when you have Electivire sporting STAB on Tpunch, So EQ would be great here. Instead of rock slide, you can put in agility for the agiligross set and outspeed your counters, namely magnezone, infernape, and Heatran, all which hit your team pretty bad.
Naughty Dragonite means you can have Fire Blast > Fire Punch. it does a lot more to skarmory, but your pretty much set there, standard DDnite.
Electivire looks ok, i've heard of magnet rise being useful, but i guess a more experienced battler will tell you otherwise.
that's my two cents on the whole team though.