Inv4sion's Tags

Status
Not open for further replies.

Inv4sion

A weakling I see, what a pity.
    • 110
    Posts
    14
    Years
    Hey guys this is Inv4sion. I am re-releasing this gallery. Plz enjoy it.
    Just a couple rules.
    1. No Spamming
    2. Only use tags if you have ASKED first.
    3. If you want an avi then I can make it unless you will.
    4. CnC would be appreciated thank you ^_^

    *Tags removed as per request*
     
    Last edited by a moderator:
    yay Well You know me ryder. I dont really want the flareon one anymore I like dark types so um Ill just take a look and edit this post K?
    EDIT:
    I want the scizor one :D
     
    Colors need major work. Don't overuse gradient maps.
    The text isn't helping the tags either, flow is okay.
    [PokeCommunity.com] Inv4sion's Tags

    This one is my favorite.
    I'm seeing potential but it needs the WOW! factor.
     
    Nice gallery Ryder! (I am still calling you that) My graphics do not compare to yours... I made my current sigs...
     
    ~Electrivire~ said:
    Nice gallery Ryder! (I am still calling you that) My graphics do not compare to yours... I made my current sigs...
    Click to expand...

    Thank you. I appreciate it (you calling me Ryder).
    A tip, when making sigs don't just paste a render over an abstract render. K?
    Not that bad for a begginner though :D
     
    Ya, that was the only render I could find... it ended out REALLY bad.. my latest piece... Milotic

    [PokeCommunity.com] Inv4sion's Tags


    Ya, that's my best so far...


    Anyway, Nice work, I want to be like ya lol
     
    Amongst the tags I see, there's nothing that catches my eye very much. You're kind of mellowing around the same sort of level even though you have a lot of tags done. You're a beginner yet there's something about your method that's not helping you improve or push forward. Without the risk of seeming harsh of course, but I'll go through a crit of some of your tags and drop a few suggestions on what you should do to move up a level in the tagging world.

    https://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/banner-3.png - This is your best yet still not great. The render completely contradicts the background and everthing else in the tag due to it's colour. You have lighting thrown about all over the tag, two lens flares (one on the left and one on the right) and yet a heavy amount of lighting coming from the bottom of the tag coming up around Weavile which really kills the tag further. You should only have one serious lighting point. The background is also very monochrome. There's a sort of dead flow, the render wants to go one way but the rest of the tag is sitting still. To be honest most of what I've mentioned are issues in most of your tags as they're composed much the same so I'm not going to go through too many more.

    https://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/scizor.png - This isn't bad, there's a nice sense of flow. However it's completely monochrome, you'd get more colours on a GBA sprite. Whatever you did to the colours, you should undo and make it work with more. The focal should also be brought out more. Scizor needs to be emphasized more prominently.

    https://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/angel.png - You have some issues with text, I can't read the text in this tag, it's the same colour as the background more or less and is really pointless because of that. What I liked about the tag was the render how it looked and where the lighting was but again, the background is really off, it's just a big blur of purple with no real flow or purpose.

    Just a lot of beginner mistakes but I would advise that you start taking some tutorials to get you out of your habits of falling into a comfort zone and staying there. That way you can never get better. So check the tutorial and resource section and read about tag making and look around for some tutorials. I would also recommend looking at other artist's work and aiming for a certain level, then take on your own style.
     
    Abnegation said:
    Amongst the tags I see, there's nothing that catches my eye very much. You're kind of mellowing around the same sort of level even though you have a lot of tags done. You're a beginner yet there's something about your method that's not helping you improve or push forward. Without the risk of seeming harsh of course, but I'll go through a crit of some of your tags and drop a few suggestions on what you should do to move up a level in the tagging world.

    https://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/banner-3.png - This is your best yet still not great. The render completely contradicts the background and everthing else in the tag due to it's colour. You have lighting thrown about all over the tag, two lens flares (one on the left and one on the right) and yet a heavy amount of lighting coming from the bottom of the tag coming up around Weavile which really kills the tag further. You should only have one serious lighting point. The background is also very monochrome. There's a sort of dead flow, the render wants to go one way but the rest of the tag is sitting still. To be honest most of what I've mentioned are issues in most of your tags as they're composed much the same so I'm not going to go through too many more.

    https://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/scizor.png - This isn't bad, there's a nice sense of flow. However it's completely monochrome, you'd get more colours on a GBA sprite. Whatever you did to the colours, you should undo and make it work with more. The focal should also be brought out more. Scizor needs to be emphasized more prominently.

    https://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af178/W4RP4NDA/Tags/angel.png - You have some issues with text, I can't read the text in this tag, it's the same colour as the background more or less and is really pointless because of that. What I liked about the tag was the render how it looked and where the lighting was but again, the background is really off, it's just a big blur of purple with no real flow or purpose.

    Just a lot of beginner mistakes but I would advise that you start taking some tutorials to get you out of your habits of falling into a comfort zone and staying there. That way you can never get better. So check the tutorial and resource section and read about tag making and look around for some tutorials. I would also recommend looking at other artist's work and aiming for a certain level, then take on your own style.
    Click to expand...

    Thanks for the tip.
    I made the angel one in 5 minutes Btw Im no tproud of it.
    The scizor render one was already gold just brighter.
    The weavile one I didn't use lens flare.
     
    Sorry but you already have a gallery, all you need is one. So I'm going to merge this ^ with it. If you want a gallery name change feel free to vm me. 1 gallery and 1 shop per person makes sense, no need to have more than one of each.
     
    Alright, moved it back.
    Closed by request~
     
    Status
    Not open for further replies.
    Back
    Top