Jimmy's Sprite Showcase

Started by Hero Griffith July 31st, 2010 11:30 AM
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Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
Hi, I'm a spriter and I like to deal with fak'emon.
So please rate and request fakmon if you like.
UPDATED DAILY!!!

Here are some Fake'mon and some creatures from the fake games by Telefang.
Fake'mon:
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Random Sprites:
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Telefang's Fake Game (Poke'mon Diamond & Jade) Revamp Sprites:
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Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!
Male
over there
Seen May 17th, 2011
Posted October 14th, 2010
51 posts
12.9 Years
Yeah the pokemon the attached Thumbnail were in a game ages ago i remember seeing them
So was it your game... Or have you stolen them..
they're revamps of another game that was translated and named pokemon diamon even though it's not a pokemon game at all.
the revamps look great, keep it up!
can you raed tihs? Bcueas if you can you jsut wetasd yuor tmie. :badsmile:
Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
thanks for the comment, and yeah they're revamps from the older fake games by Telephang(Poke'mon Diamond and Jade)

Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!
Age 5
Male
battlefield
Seen September 28th, 2022
Posted January 9th, 2022
2,982 posts
14.2 Years
These sprites look really dark,what you could do is use some brighter outline,preferably from it's palette.

For the 'what-seems-to-look-like-a' Stantler evolution;
The antlers could use some editing as well. Going top to bottom, it's third antler(left antlers) can use some fixing up,it's very squished together near the tip. Possibly space them out like you did for the first antler. I can see you used a dark brown to outline most of it's body from the back and to the back of it's leg. Instead of having dark brown outline you could use just simply black outline to make it look less dark or pillow-shaded. For the back leg,I would move it a little forward for a more realistic spacing.

For the 'what-seems-to-look-like-a' Lapras Evolution;
Again like I said for the Stantler evolution,you could use some black outline on the shaded parts of it's body. Also for that thing on it's chest, it could use some lighter outlline than the black. For the creamy-white part of it's body,you can use a little darker shade in my opinion. x:
It's difficult to see it's back a little bit because of the lack depth. but you did a great job on the back,i really like it.

For this particular Fakemon;
There are a couple of disturbing things from this sprite,for one,it looks like you resized it to make it bigger,second there are a lot of random black pixels as the outline that aren't really needed. There is a 2x pixel block on the back that makes it look resized. You just need to fix up the outline,it looks real choppy. :/

Overall patch up some of your outlining,maybe some darker shades for your palettes as well,you did a nice job. I hope to see more from you.

i didn't bother giving criticism on the revamps,they look real decent but they're only simple revamps of the colours only. i'd love it if you did some scratch work to revamp the said sprites.

project ember
Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
New Update, Hope you guys enjoy!!!

Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!
Male
A place.
Seen January 6th, 2016
Posted October 18th, 2010
180 posts
13.7 Years
Hmm... I like your sprites a lot, your lineart is good, and the colors are good. However, I have noticed that some of your Pokemon's evolution do not differentate from their original form very much. For instance, on the first family, the second and third forms look almost identical with exception of more blade wing things on it's back. You may want to work on that, but otherwise you are doing just fine. Keep it up!

~Prof. W.
Visit my sprite topic at-
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=227637
My Platinum FC is 4812-8755-1726
Prof. W.'s PokePet

Ivysaur the level 31 Ivysaur!
Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
Hmm... I like your sprites a lot, your lineart is good, and the colors are good. However, I have noticed that some of your Pokemon's evolution do not differentate from their original form very much. For instance, on the first family, the second and third forms look almost identical with exception of more blade wing things on it's back. You may want to work on that, but otherwise you are doing just fine. Keep it up!

~Prof. W.
yeah, but those arent my poke'mon, they're not even really pokemon at all. just revamps from the GBC game by Telephang like I've mentioned before...

Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!
Male
A place.
Seen January 6th, 2016
Posted October 18th, 2010
180 posts
13.7 Years
yeah, but those arent my poke'mon, they're not even really pokemon at all. just revamps from the GBC game by Telephang like I've mentioned before...
Oops... sorry. Maybe I start reading earlier posts before I give my 10 cents. :p

Anyways, you're other work is good. The only one I have a real problem with is the narwhale, you resized it but didn't fix it afterwords, making it very blocky. Keep it up-

~Prof. W.
Visit my sprite topic at-
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=227637
My Platinum FC is 4812-8755-1726
Prof. W.'s PokePet

Ivysaur the level 31 Ivysaur!
Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
sorry for sounding kinda illish. And thanks very much!!!
also i updated the whale poke.

Here you go:

Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!
Male
A place.
Seen January 6th, 2016
Posted October 18th, 2010
180 posts
13.7 Years
sorry for sounding kinda illish. And thanks very much!!!
also i updated the whale poke.

Here you go:
There- it looks much better now. The only thing that I would change is the top of it's head- it's too flat. Otherwise, it looks great.

~Prof. W.
Visit my sprite topic at-
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=227637
My Platinum FC is 4812-8755-1726
Prof. W.'s PokePet

Ivysaur the level 31 Ivysaur!
Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
Thanks Professor W., so would anyone like to see anything sprited?

EDIT: UPDATE!!!
New fake'mon for you guys to enjoy

Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!

= GPR =

Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
Illinois
Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
14.9 Years
many of you sprites suffer from a jagged blocky look :/

as much as i want to say "round them off"... i know it's not that easy and you're probably not that prepared to go back and entirely change finished product.

maybe go into chesu's spriting tutorial, if you already haven't. It's a great help with the anatomy of sprites. Also though, on new works, maybe if you use the *1.1.1.2.2.3.2.2.1.1.1 method in your curves? Scarf showed me it and i thought i works pretty well!


*

Either way, they're just suggestions ^^ Take them as you wish... lol

Keep Spriting!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

Age 31
Male
Seen July 19th, 2016
Posted January 19th, 2011
45 posts
13.6 Years
thanks for all the suggestions and critisim. I've been away due to family issues but I'm ready to still take requests and keep spriting.

Join My Hack Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!!!
Hack name: Poke'mon Jade Poke'mon Carnelian
Hack of: Poke'mon Fire Red
Storyline: I'd like to keep it pretty basic like the original Poke'mon games. You've turned 16 today. This is it; the day you've been waiting for. Today you begin your journey through the Kago Region to become a Poke'mon Master. You work in a Poke'mon Lab/Research Center/ Ranch for Professor Cypress. He's being extra generous as to give you your first Poke'mon for your birthday. Time to show the world what you have! .... Not to mention Team Rocket has just set their their coordinates for the Kago Region at the same time. Will they live up to their name, and cause mischief along your path? Find Out while playing Poke'mon Jade & Carnelian!
Features:
- New Stuff-
1. New Region, Kago

2. New Hero/Heroine (Name Bases - Jade (Girl) for Jade, Carn (Boy) for Carnelian)
3. Villains are none other than Team Rocket
4. 30 New Poke'mon (15 per version)
5. Yes there will be two versions. Everything will be the same except title screen and catchable Poke'mon.
FOR INFO ABOUT THE HACK, PLEASE MESSAGE OR PM ME, THANKS!!!

blackmoonflower

You won't like me if I'm angry

Age 31
Female
Burton, MI
Seen April 9th, 2014
Posted September 6th, 2013
271 posts
13.5 Years
Sorry, I just reported your post. :D

Anyway, with your little raven, I noticed that the shading is hardly noticeable since it's such a dark sprite. Lightening it and adding more detailed shading would make it look better, I think.

The grassy monster thing seems a little too busy in the design, in my opinion. And I see some shading errors in that fiery bug looking thing. The belly in particular. To me, the line shading seems reversed. It's dark on the left and light on the right.


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Esper

California
Seen June 30th, 2018
Posted June 30th, 2018
Since this thread was over a month old before it was revived I've got to lock it.

Hero Griffith: if you want to start a new thread you are welcome to. I can also unlock this is you would like to continue it.