okay, thanks for replying everyone and I appreciate your praise and suggestions.
@Decideblue, the fisher cat is Ferpipa, and Blazgu is more prehistoricish and bipedal unlike Torkoal, I'll try to draw what it looks like to show you
-UPDATE-
Spruce: Alright! Let’s go out back and test out these Pokemon in Battle
Narrator: Professor Spruce took the 3 young heroes outside to the garden as some Sentret and Zigzagoon were frolicking among the grass
Spruce: Alright, kids in these Poke Balls are 3 Pokemon, I want you each to take 1.
Jack: Alright, I guess I’ll take the Poke Ball with the leaf on it.
Tony: (to self) Obviously I’ve got to take the Fire type to beat Jack.
(Tony snags the ball with the flame on it)
Alana: Well I guess I’m stuck with this one…
Spruce: Okay well why don’t you click the button and check your Pokemon out?
All 3: (simultaneously) Alright
(Triimur pops out of Jack’s Pokeball)
Triimur: Triimur? Triiii! (Climbs on Jack’s head)
Jack: I see you’re a fiesty one, let’s see, since your female I’ll call you Leafica!
Leafica: Gotcha, master! I’ll do my best!
Jack: Yup, alright,- WAIT did you just say something to me?
Alana: Jack?
Jack: Huh? What?
Alana: Now who’s the one in the trance? (laughs lightly)
Jack: Oh, I was just talking to my-
Alana: Your what?
Jack: Myself. I was talking to myself.
Alana: Okay then…, anyway how do you like my Ferpipa, Jack? His name is Hydro?
Tony: He’s not as cool as Smokey, right buddy?
Smokey *snorts smoke out of its nostrils with a sneer on its face*
Jack: Oh yeah, then let’s battle to prove it!
Leafica: You go, Jack!
Spruce: I meant for you to practice fighting the Zigzagoon…
Tony: There’s no time for that, go Smokey!
Jack: Come on, Leafica!
Tony: This’ll be a cinch!
Jack: Scratch attack!
(Leafica goes up to Smokey and scratches it, although Smokey shakes it off)
Tony: Alright, let’s start of by using Withdraw!
Jack: Scratch, Once more
Leafica: (after it uses scratch) We don’t seem to be doing much to it…
Tony: Withdraw again, Smokey!
Jack: You can’t win if your not going to attack! Scratch!
(Same Result, minimal damage)
Tony: Tackle attack!
Leafica: (thrown back) Ouch, that was pretty powerful!
Jack: Use Scratch!
Leafica: No dice, again! This Smokey is a tough one!
Tony: Finishing Time! Tackle!
(Smokey charges and knocks Leafica to the ground)
Spruce: That’s it! It looks like Smokey has won!
Tony: What did I tell ya? We’re the champs!
Jack: (holding Leafica) You okay, girl?
Leafica: Errghh..Yeah, we’ll get em next time!
Jack: Alright! (slaps Leafica five)
Jack: I just don’t get it, we attacked more, why didn’t we win?
Tony: Its simple really, I took advantage of Smokey’ s already high defense, and boosted it to make it far more durable than Leafica, who is much faster and is a better attacker all around. Basically, I won with defense, each Pokemon has their own strengths, Leafica’s is Speed and Attacking, Blazgu’s is Defending.
Jack: I see now, thanks for the tip, Tony!
Tony: (parts hair) My Pleasure.
AN: Only Jack can hear Leafica talk btw.
Post Contest: Pokemon:NA will have new evolutions of Old Pokemon, I want you guys (the loyal readers) to suggest some Pokemon that need evolutions. BEST SUGGESTION WINS AND WILL APPEAR IN THE STORY. Pictures, additional info, and Naming will definitley help you win.
paired to kaori & vrai