Peace? o.O;;;

Started by Lily November 19th, 2004 6:13 PM
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Lily

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Like, an uber lame poem. ;D However lame it is, read it.



There was once a time
Where the Earth was beautifully still
Serenity blessed the land
Humanity was tranquil

We would read a book
Without anyones call
One would help each other
When the other took the fall

It happened long ago
Where we would just walk out
Without the fear of pain
What fright was all about

There was once a time
Where all fighting would just cease
It doesn't exist now;
But I still call it 'Peace.'

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Its short and sweet, and it was nice to read I liked the way that you didn't go too much into advanced vocabulary and it turned out just as nice as one that would have. If only it were like that more in this strange and hectic world.
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Indeed. I visualize peace so perfectly, but it isn't possible sadly. Inspiration was from a China dynasty long ago I read someplace, somewhere.

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