Fairy pictures!

Started by Jolene September 9th, 2010 12:40 PM
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Trent_Jayir

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Posted March 18th, 2012
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Hi Jolene, these are some nice faries!
Both images are peaceful and happy, they both have a quiet and pretty quailty about them.
Your anatomy is really good, everything is in prortion, it's nice to see that!

If you wanted to immprove, I'd reccommend making your figures more shapely. Everything is very soft but solid and ridgid too. For example, the shoulders on both of them seem too... almost simplified? They need to have more shape to them. The other example of this would be the second ones waist. Its very straight, but a females shape should be more curved in and then back out for the hips, even if she wasn't particularly curvy, theres shape to that area at least.
As for the feet, they look okay to me ;'> Once again, if you let the bodies have a bit more shape when you draw them I think the feet might even themselves out.

Having said all that, I really like these and that you made their build almost child-like. It makes them seem very innocent and sweet, just how faries should be!
Did you use a biro? I like the effect it has, too.
Great stuff, I hope we get to see more! :'D

SIN1488

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Seen January 9th, 2012
Posted November 6th, 2011
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Well, if you want constructive criticism...... On the first one, the upper left wing looks a bit smaller than the right one.

And on the second one, I'm not sure, but the right arm seems kind of long compared to the other one.

Also, ManhattanTheStarr was right, you can draw good hands, but I don't see anything wrong with the feet either?

And why is the second one sad? >_<
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