FireRed Pokemon Dimension Legends[Demo Released]

Started by Crimson Stardust September 17th, 2010 5:49 AM
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Posted October 16th, 2021
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Introduction
Legend
Story
History
Features
Screenshots
Videos
Progress
My team
Support
Credits
Playable Beta/Demo
Test Demo[located at the end of this post]

I present to you :


:.Introduction.:
--> You know me, I just recently made a Pokemon hack thread called "U-Animal: The Mystery of Black Rose."
--> I decided to pause that Hack and recontinue "Pokemon: Dimension Legends"
--> This was my first Pokemon Hack on PokeCommunity and I see that it has the potential to go far.
--> With my new and improve skills, I decided to rework this hack.
--> I hope you guys will support me!



:.Legend.:
When a portal to an unknown Dimension is opened, The fate of the world lies in the hand of a boy who is believed
to have the power to stop the "God of Chaos"

This Prophecy have been handed down from the past generations to the current generation. But yet, no one believed
it because no one has ever seen it happened. Now, the people are now seeing the prophecy come to light one at a time and the
only one who can fulfill the prophecy and stop the "God of Chaos" is YOU!

:.Story.:
Spoiler:

The story started out with "Ace"(Hero) in the region of "Sterra" at route 1...

One morning, Ace suddenly hears a raging argument going on. Ace went to see it. He saw the two grunts having an argument
with an old man. The 1st guy started shouting at the old man and demands something from him. The 2nd grunt took out a Pokemon
and started to threaten the old man. Ace is a guy who always stand up to justice so he ran toward the old man to help him out.

The grunts challenged him to a Pokemon battle but Ace doesn't have any Pokemon. The old man took out 3 Pokeballs and
asks Ace to choose 1 to battle the grunts. Ace selected one Pokemon and summoned it. The Pokemon battle begins.

Ace won the match against one of the grunts and the mysterious grunts ran off. The old man was actually a professor. The
professor explained everything to Ace. He said that they wanted to take the plan for a very top secret project he was working on. The
professor was reluctant to tell anything more to Ace. He gave the Pokemon that Ace used during the battle and Ace decided to went off.

Ace decided to go back to "Lotic Town" to find his grandmother friend, "Melvin" as it was indicated in the letter that is left by his grandmother.
When Ace reached "Lotic Town" he asked around the people if they knew or saw "Melvin" and he was directed to a lab which is actually
handled by "Melvin" and later found out that he is the professor you helped out on the woods.

Ace gave the letter to "Prof. Melvin" which is intended for him. After "Prof. Melvin" finished reading the letter, he explained
everything to Ace about the incident which happened because of the research on the other dimension wherein "Giratina" was sealed in.
"Prof. Melvin" said that there was a gap between the dimension that they were in and the dimension where "Giratina" was sealed in
and he is trying to remend the gap to prevent "Giratina" from entering our dimension.

He conluded that the cause of this gap are maybe the work of the "Black Rose" and told Ace that the two guys before was
from "Black Rose" He promised his grandmother to protect the region of "Sterra" if ever anything happens to it. Ace told the professor that
he will be venturing the region of "Sterra" to know more about what is happening and to stop the evil team "Black Rose"


Ace is a wandering boy which was originally from the region of Deria.He went to this region as his grandmother told him too for her last wish before she died.Ace was told that he have something to do at this region.That was the only lead Ace got.

Deeper Storyline:
In the later part of the Hack, you will get to know that your grandmother was a member of a group named "Stardust" who were
known in history that is trying to stop a group of evil Pokemon trainers called "Black Rose" from conquering the world with the help of an
evil Pokemon also known as the "God of Chaos" named "Giratina" In the hope to banish "Giratina" to the other dimension, some members
of the "Stardust" sacrificed there life to seal "Giratina" to another dimension.

In the second town, Ace will meet a boy named "Ray". An obnoxious boy for the first impression but he is a kind boy after you get
to know him. Throughout the hack, you will get to know "Ray" and all of his purposes. During your first meet up, "Ray" will just brush you aside
and ignore you.



{The Goal Of The Game}
Spoiler:

During the calamities in banishing "Giratina", 8 "Shards" that has the enough power to seal the gate to the other dimension were
scattered. It was also said that the "Shards" can open or completely destroy the gate. Only a few people in the "Sterra" region knows about
it. Even "Prof. Melvin" doesn't know about this. If the "Shards" are combined together, it will open the gate to another dimension and allowing
you to enter it. "Ray" on the other hand has a mysterious quest given to him. In time, you will find yourself meeting "Ray" all of the time.




:.History.:

Ace's History
Spoiler:

Ace was born on a region called "Deria". He was started to raise by his grandmother at the age of 3 because his parents died in a
car accident. Ace grew up to be a fine boy but he is the shy/silent type. He never gets angry unless he was forced to do so. Ace is an upright boy
who always uphold to justice. Ace maybe the shy/silent type but he is also an adventurous guy and never stops whenever adventure calls him.
Before his grandmother's death, He was told to go to the region of "Sterra" to fix up the loose stuff she has done there. The death of his
grandmother was caused by the "Black Rose" which motivates Ace to fulfill his grandmother's last wish. Ace went to visit Lotic Town but he
encountered a problem on route 1. There on, your very own adventure begins!



Ray History
Spoiler:

A very mysterious boy in the game that you will meet and know him whether he is on your side or the evil side.


Stardust
Spoiler:

A group of professional trainers who were brought together to stop an evil organization called "Black Rose". The group was ceased
to exist after a big fight against the "Black Rose" and "Giratina". The group was never seen again because the members sacrificed their lives
on banishing "Giratina" to the other dimension. In the hack, Ace's grandmother and "Prof. Melvin" were the only remaining members of "Stardust".
In fact, "Ray" has a connection with "Stardust" itself.



Black Rose
Spoiler:

A group of very evil Pokemon trainers whose goal was to conquer the world. It was said that the organization manage to make "Giratina"
aid them in battle against "Stardust". Only little info was known on this group.



:.Features.:
~The Pokemons are vastly from diffirent regions.
~All the gyms will be different from each other. The Pokemon Types, New Tile for every Gym, etc.
~New Routes
~New places to explore
~New music for all place
~New Evil organization
~New Sprites
~I am planning a different kind of Pokemon league contest. I want to follow the ones in the Pokemon series wherein there will be group
stages where the hero/heroine will battle all of the famous trainers from different region until He/She reaches the final stage and win
to qualify for an elite 4 battle.
~New Battle Backgrounds

[What i am planning but not sure if they can be done]

~I will also add a new place called "The Reverse World" wherein in the movie it was said that it's Giratina's home
~There will be an item called "Gracidea Flower" that will enable "Shaymin" to evolve to sky form
~There will be an item called "Grisious Orb" that enables "Giratina" evolve to its origin form
~There will be an item called "Night Orb" that changes Shaymin's sky form to a normal form
~There will be another item called "Gravity Bond" that evolves "Giratina" to its another form
*All of these items will be sold on a secret shop in the game and will be very expensive.
~There will be place called "ShadeSide Town" where "Darkrai can be found



:.Screenshots.:
Spoiler:











:.Videos.:
Black Rose attack an old man!?


:.Progress.:
Demo 1 - Complete
Demo 2 - 50%
Beta 1 - 5%


:.Beta/Demo.:
Demo on the end of this post


:.My Team.:
Crimson Stardust - Owner, Mapper, Scripter, Tile Maker, Tile Inserter, Music Inserter, Making Graphic.
N0rul3s - Co-Owner, Spriter, Sprite inserter.
Trebuh - Graphic Artist, Tile inserter.
Mindfreak - Graphic Artist.
Dorandragon - Spriter
Agentgeo - Scripter
Astar - Scripting help, Sprite inserter is he is free.
AlexAhnon - Whatever I need help with excluding spriting.
Full Metal - Asm Hacker


:.Support Banners.:










:.Credits.:
Alucus - For the tiles
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Alistair - For the tiles
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Mervyn - For the Css too
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Neo- Wolf- For CSS
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Wesleyfg - For the tiles
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Astar1 - For teaching me scripting
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Alexahnon - For teaching me scripting
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Agentgeo - For helping me out on scripting abit
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Nasonex - For regrammaring the whole thread
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874521 - For some tiles
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Sarcastic Prince For fixing the grammar
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This credits are for real, the screenshots shown are from the beta because the new tiles are being inserted at the moment.
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Crimson Stardust


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Revered with the stars

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Seen December 25th, 2016
Posted September 30th, 2012
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13.2 Years
So I might as well post here, it's not nice to see your thread empty (except for the person who asked for a beta, what's wrong with you man?).

Judging by the screenshots, I could tell that your maps could use some improvement, they need more playabilty (space to move around). I'd like to see which tiles you inserted, though by the credits, I could already make a good guess. I'd like to see some scripts being done, so far all I see is screenshots of the scenery.

Good luck in the future.
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Posted May 4th, 2013
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It looks pretty good so far. One of the hardest things for you might be putting in DP moves for the pokemon. Darkrai should definitely know Dark Void, that is his signature move. And he should have the same effect he has in the other games (where when sleeping, you are damaged by him just being present).

And Giratina should know his signature moves also
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So I might as well post here, it's not nice to see your thread empty (except for the person who asked for a beta, what's wrong with you man?).

Judging by the screenshots, I could tell that your maps could use some improvement, they need more playabilty (space to move around). I'd like to see which tiles you inserted, though by the credits, I could already make a good guess. I'd like to see some scripts being done, so far all I see is screenshots of the scenery.

Good luck in the future.
Thats my mapping style,and I gave playibility too on the maps so you will
Have abit space to move around,but i will take ur advice and try to give my map space.
And the tiles I hope will make my maps looks great.Im currently
trying to learn scripting so I can script and since the tiles are being insert atm,my current scripter will not be scripting for now.

The screenshots don't look that bad, =3 Though I found a tile error in one. The ledge end is wrong:

The story is alright also, lots of nice details.
Damns,i figured that..forgot which tile for it,still don't know..lol
And tanx for the story,you will see many interesting events in the hack..

It looks pretty good so far. One of the hardest things for you might be putting in DP moves for the pokemon. Darkrai should definitely know Dark Void, that is his signature move. And he should have the same effect he has in the other games (where when sleeping, you are damaged by him just being present).

And Giratina should know his signature moves also
I don't think I will be able to do so..maybe I will just renamed attacks or use the moves available on fire red..
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Posted October 25th, 2012
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12.7 Years
IMO i thnk the story is a good foundation but i dont think it gives me enough drive as a player to play it. In the hack make it more engaging as to why stopping black rose a priority and as to why protecting your region is more than a dying wish from an old woman but more a duty as a native to that region.
Fight as hard as you can 'til you faint!- Bruno
Willow is my middle name. Willow is flexible and not easily broken. I'm not giving up yet- Pryce
Pokemon: Mittsu Legends *coming soon*
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Nice. Good to finally see a thread for this hack.
yeah

IMO i thnk the story is a good foundation but i dont think it gives me enough drive as a player to play it. In the hack make it more engaging as to why stopping black rose a priority and as to why protecting your region is more than a dying wish from an old woman but more a duty as a native to that region.
okae,you have a point there,but if i did not express fully,the player has no one left in the world,his last relative was his grandmother,and he felt oblidge to fulfil his last grandmother dying wish as he always hear from his grandmother tales about her youth time at the region deria,and how that region hold wonderful memories for her and don't want to see it destroyed and to takes her place for the upcoming battle with the god of chaos if it appear as her grandmother said,the player is the last chance to tell her other member which remain at the region sterra since the grandmother is dying and have no one else there to convey the messege.So the player decided to go to sterra to find Melvin to inform him of what the goal of the black rose.If i forgot to inform,her grandmother death involve the involvement of black rose which sparks the player to go to the region of sterra.

Edit:
This is just a video of my unfinish script,the text need some grammar adjustment,i just know how the grammar must be..hahax..this video is not finish,its just that i want to show im actually working on something,the tiles are going to change,this is just a prototype..My first time scripting,and this is quite a long one,got help from few scripters here on pc and manage to learn scripting and to do the first event myself,so quite proud to be able to make my own script after 1 year of hacking but fail on scripting..hahax



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vdotQotPfMc

Btw,i guess there won't be a girl in my hack since i wrote my storyline with a boy.
If you guys wants a girl to be availble,tell me here and i will make the decision to change the script..
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Posted October 25th, 2012
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okae,you have a point there,but if i did not express fully,the player has no one left in the world,his last relative was his grandmother,and he felt oblidge to fulfil his last grandmother dying wish as he always hear from his grandmother tales about her youth time at the region deria,and how that region hold wonderful memories for her and don't want to see it destroyed and to takes her place for the upcoming battle with the god of chaos if it appear as her grandmother said,the player is the last chance to tell her other member which remain at the region sterra since the grandmother is dying and have no one else there to convey the messege.So the player decided to go to sterra to find Melvin to inform him of what the goal of the black rose.If i forgot to inform,her grandmother death involve the involvement of black rose which sparks the player to go to the region of sterra.
And that is the type of side info that makes or breaks the story. Mentioning that background atleast now puts the player in the hero's shoes so the player isn't like "why should i even care?".
Fight as hard as you can 'til you faint!- Bruno
Willow is my middle name. Willow is flexible and not easily broken. I'm not giving up yet- Pryce
Pokemon: Mittsu Legends *coming soon*
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Update your screens, they're to plain and ordinary, and well they show nothing...
Yeah i noe.I wont be changing the screenshots for awhile now since im having my tiled inserted,aftet i get my new rom,then I will post new screeshot with scripts in it like from the video.

And that is the type of side info that makes or breaks the story. Mentioning that background atleast now puts the player in the hero's shoes so the player isn't like "why should i even care?".
Yeah,haha,when i first wrote the story i was intended to let you guys know this,so i wasnt very clear though..hahax,i will be updating the thread of new info and screenshots.
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Okays, I like the scripting that I've seen so far. But the terms, they seem all to familiar.

Stardust? Black Rose? They sound like a very famous card game which rhymes with Moo-Gi-Oh for som reason...
hahax,black rose was a name from yu gi oh..so are stardust,i just use them cause they are the words that came into my mind when doing this hack..hahax
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UPDATES








I scripting the prof Melvin intro part,
lazy to change the map since it is a test drive since i havent got my tiles inserted.
still got a minor problem with the first event,like the event won't go away,after like i went off the map then went back to the spot,the script activate again,even though i put flags,gonna have a look at that one..


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Updates or so it seems
Been waiting for 2-3 days for htis video to upload,always error when finishing but finally its up..
Still got to fix a monor problem like the scripts keep happening and won't go away.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nBnRLSUJUh8

hOW DO I MAKE IT APPEAR LIKE A VIDEO BOX INSTEAD OF A LINK..HAHAX
and why no one is commenting,i want to know opinions..
maybe im going to map out all using fire red default tileset before
my tiles are isnerted then later remap them
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Azrul, the scripting is great in that video, but you should watch some gramatical errors (ie "prepare to be defeated", not "defeat") as well as harsh things mentioned (ie blood). Anyway, that's imo.
yeah,don't worry about that,i most of the grammar,have not changed the defeated yet,forgot to,now that you remind me,and i will take out the blood..hahax..
and tanx for the compliment,actually the script has been edited abit but seeing it take me two days to finnaly able to upload this,hahax,you can say its a old version.
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Posted October 25th, 2012
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I felt the first event was kinda long and drawn and could be slimmed down a bit more, and the whole mentioning of him leaving the scene bleeding (to me) made the game more realistic cause i mean i know i'm not going to leave a scence all clean and fresh after fending off a rattata with my shoe and a stick.
Fight as hard as you can 'til you faint!- Bruno
Willow is my middle name. Willow is flexible and not easily broken. I'm not giving up yet- Pryce
Pokemon: Mittsu Legends *coming soon*
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Posted October 16th, 2021
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I felt the first event was kinda long and drawn and could be slimmed down a bit more, and the whole mentioning of him leaving the scene bleeding (to me) made the game more realistic cause i mean i know i'm not going to leave a scence all clean and fresh after fending off a rattata with my shoe and a stick.
hahax,if you think this is long wait before the prof event,it is much longer..hahax,
i don't noe how to slimmed it down since i need to tell the player what is happening so YOU, will noe what you playing in the hack..hahax

Edit:
The grammar in the scripts are being fixed so no worries about that.
I welcome my grammar fixer..,lol..nasonex..hahax
And also new and improved music will probabily be insert in replace for the fire red music
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UPDATES




First up is BLISS CANYON.If you wanna see the full picture,tell me.
This is the route right after route 1 you need to go thru before reaching the second town.



Next up is ESTUARY TOWN.
The second town,with a gym,the first demo/alpha ends here i guess.




Okae,im done with the updates.I got a surprise news today,my tiles are
confirm be inserted and my friend gonna implement few
cool stuff in it too.
So you can say this is a test rom,or test demo/alpha for you guys to try out before i got my rom back,don't worry,this test is also gonna be cool,all the maps i make here is not for fun,i make them with love,lol,..hahax,basically i map them carefully.
Im gonna implement few stuff in such as berry trees[idea from astar],but still have not figured out how,and more cool sidequest.xD
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Edit:
The grammar in the scripts are being fixed so no worries about that.
I welcome my grammar fixer..,lol..nasonex..hahax
And also new and improved music will probabily be insert in replace for the fire red music
Don't forget that you can always hire me as a grammar corrector as well, friend. Anyways, about the updates, they are cool.

But about the video, there are a few things that you should watch out.
I know the thugs shown in the video are not Team Rocket. They are "Black Rose". So, why don't you just change the Trainer Class from "Team Rocket" to "Black Rose"? The results will be: Black Rose Grunt would like to battle!

(Can you also decapitalize the trainer classes as well?)

Other than that, good luck.
I am now an anime dubber, cover singer and a fan of anime. I can still apply as a translator and grammar corrector, though.
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Don't forget that you can always hire me as a grammar corrector as well, friend. Anyways, about the updates, they are cool.

But about the video, there are a few things that you should watch out.
I know the thugs shown in the video are not Team Rocket. They are "Black Rose". So, why don't you just change the Trainer Class from "Team Rocket" to "Black Rose"? The results will be: Black Rose Grunt would like to battle!

(Can you also decapitalize the trainer classes as well?)

Other than that, good luck.
hahax,tanx for the compliment,and sarcastic prince you were also in my mind when i wanna fixed the grammar,if my grammar fixer can't do it bcause of business,can i request your help?
if you wanna,say so here so i can add you up as you can do the scripts well,you just need to fix them..xD
for the video,hahahax,
lemme tell you something,the video was a test to show one of my scripter i can do it,but it take me 2 days to upload it,in the 2 days,i already change the trainer class etc,so lazy to upload again the new one,
and for now,even the map is changed...,all are changed to new ones..
and what do you mean by decapitilized the trainer class?