CREEPYPASTA COMPETITION III

Started by redsaber5859 October 1st, 2010 7:19 PM
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Male
Ever Grande City, Hoenn
Seen February 26th, 2011
Posted November 8th, 2010
768 posts
13 Years
Monthly CreepyPasta comp. (3)

HERE ARE THE RULES:
  • No stealing works
  • Make them as believable, and creepy as possible
  • Try to make them longer, and more original than current ones!
  • Have fun!
  • The contest ends on November 1st
ENTRIES:
Currently None

JUDGES:
ME!!!!!!

rainbow

they/them
UK
Seen November 17th, 2022
Posted December 14th, 2021
782 posts
14.1 Years
Are you sitting comfortably?
Then I shall begin.

Spoiler:
I've been on the web a lot recently, and have seen a lot of pokemon creepypastas.
I also noticed that only one actually features any gen higher than 2.

But then, I thought.
What if it wasn't just gen I, II, or III.
What if Gen IV had something in too?
I began to investigate.


Now, I ususally use my R4i to play games, but oddly enough, it had
stopped working just yesterday, I'd been meaning to play platinum again for a while, so I got my mum to find one on ebay, she bought it, and I paid her £10.00
I thought that it was a bargain, as most ds games are £20 to £30.
So, in two days it arrived and I immediately put it in my DSi and turned it on.
The title screen came on as normal, but the 3D giratina, was no longer origin forme.
I didn't think that hacking the 3D models in the game was possible to that extreme yet, but I shrugged it off and decided it was a hacked game.
Intruiged at this though, I proceeded to the menu.
There was no wifi options or new game or any of those.
Just continue and some stats.
Apparently, the previous owner had played for 24:00 hours.
A whole day.
Also, he was called robert all in lower case like that.
He had logged 200 pokemon on his pokedex, and had all 8 badges.
I proceeded to see the journal, his last action -according to the journal- was losing to Champion Cynthia.(I know how annoying that can be)
Then I proceeded to the game.
I checked his team, it looked pretty hacked to me.
Six LVL 5 Darkrai.
I came out and saw where I was, outside the pokemon league.
This was where he last saved I guessed.
I went inside the pokemon leauge, and what I saw chilled me to the bone...

The maids at the Pokemon Center and Pokemart were skeletons and if you talked to them, it said "They are coming."
I then looked at my team, hoping nothing had happened like in some things I'd read, but all the darkrai were now lvl 4.
I checked his PC and I found a box of eggs,(presumably hacked) and a box called EXPERIMENTS.
I looked at it and in there were 5 lugias.
I checked their stats and the sprite for every one was a lugia,but blood spilling out from their hearts.
The box name gave away he was hacking, but what came next made me freeze in terror...

I found some strong pokemon in his PC, and built a team.

I continued to demolish the league over the next 20mins.
Then I went to the hall of fame and cynthia lead me through and then, when we got to the end cynthia said,
"For you master!"
She then ran back and my sprite stepped forward.
An old man ghost appeared and then said,
"I am robert, you have defeated champion cynthia....harvey."
I froze.
How could it know my name?
It spoke again,
"Ah ha ha ha. You wonder how I know you, don't you?"
I was scared now.
Really scared.
"Well I am your enemy, and we shall do battle!"
My fear had now partially gone.
We engaged in a battle:

"robert sent out BILLY!"
Billy was one of my enemies who teased me every day at school.
This was a charizard with a smug look.
I sent out a venosaur.(He was obviously going to wipe the floor with me.)
I used leaf storm.
"BILLY used Taunt!"
The game then played the laugh of the billy I know.
It then said.
"BILLY used Torment!"
It then played billy saying,
"oohhh harvey's in looooovvveee!"
then the game said that billy fainted.
Then in this order (BEN,ANTONIO,JAMES,JOHN) he sent out these four.
I knocked them all out.
He then sent out what made me begin to cry.
"robert sent out LYDIA!"
A picture of my girlfriend appeared.
She was crying though, and it then said,
"LYDIA used heart breaker!"
I thought "that's not a move"
I then fainted and it said:
"Goodbye, Harvey. You lose!"

I couldn't take it anymore, so I turned the DS off, removed the card and put it in the bin.
I told my mum that it broke, so I didn't have to tell her what happened.
I never used my DS again for 3 weeks after that, and with a new Acekard2i, I put it in and it said,
"robert is watching...."
I felt a sudden gust of wind, yet all the windows and doors were closed.
I then looked out the window and saw a man.
he grinned evilly and waved.
I screamed.

A month later I found a Platinum cart in my house.
It was the same one.
I then left it for someone else to find, outside my house...


THE END
Male
Ever Grande City, Hoenn
Seen February 26th, 2011
Posted November 8th, 2010
768 posts
13 Years
Are you sitting comfortably?
Then I shall begin.

Spoiler:
I've been on the web a lot recently, and have seen a lot of pokemon creepypastas.
I also noticed that only one actually features any gen higher than 2.

But then, I thought.
What if it wasn't just gen I, II, or III.
What if Gen IV had something in too?
I began to investigate.


Now, I ususally use my R4i to play games, but oddly enough, it had
stopped working just yesterday, I'd been meaning to play platinum again for a while, so I got my mum to find one on ebay, she bought it, and I paid her £10.00
I thought that it was a bargain, as most ds games are £20 to £30.
So, in two days it arrived and I immediately put it in my DSi and turned it on.
The title screen came on as normal, but the 3D giratina, was no longer origin forme.
I didn't think that hacking the 3D models in the game was possible to that extreme yet, but I shrugged it off and decided it was a hacked game.
Intruiged at this though, I proceeded to the menu.
There was no wifi options or new game or any of those.
Just continue and some stats.
Apparently, the previous owner had played for 24:00 hours.
A whole day.
Also, he was called robert all in lower case like that.
He had logged 200 pokemon on his pokedex, and had all 8 badges.
I proceeded to see the journal, his last action -according to the journal- was losing to Champion Cynthia.(I know how annoying that can be)
Then I proceeded to the game.
I checked his team, it looked pretty hacked to me.
Six LVL 5 Darkrai.
I came out and saw where I was, outside the pokemon league.
This was where he last saved I guessed.
I went inside the pokemon leauge, and what I saw chilled me to the bone...

The maids at the Pokemon Center and Pokemart were skeletons and if you talked to them, it said "They are coming."
I then looked at my team, hoping nothing had happened like in some things I'd read, but all the darkrai were now lvl 4.
I checked his PC and I found a box of eggs,(presumably hacked) and a box called EXPERIMENTS.
I looked at it and in there were 5 lugias.
I checked their stats and the sprite for every one was a lugia,but blood spilling out from their hearts.
The box name gave away he was hacking, but what came next made me freeze in terror...

I found some strong pokemon in his PC, and built a team.

I continued to demolish the league over the next 20mins.
Then I went to the hall of fame and cynthia lead me through and then, when we got to the end cynthia said,
"For you master!"
She then ran back and my sprite stepped forward.
An old man ghost appeared and then said,
"I am robert, you have defeated champion cynthia....harvey."
I froze.
How could it know my name?
It spoke again,
"Ah ha ha ha. You wonder how I know you, don't you?"
I was scared now.
Really scared.
"Well I am your enemy, and we shall do battle!"
My fear had now partially gone.
We engaged in a battle:

"robert sent out BILLY!"
Billy was one of my enemies who teased me every day at school.
This was a charizard with a smug look.
I sent out a venosaur.(He was obviously going to wipe the floor with me.)
I used leaf storm.
"BILLY used Taunt!"
The game then played the laugh of the billy I know.
It then said.
"BILLY used Torment!"
It then played billy saying,
"oohhh harvey's in looooovvveee!"
then the game said that billy fainted.
Then in this order (BEN,ANTONIO,JAMES,JOHN) he sent out these four.
I knocked them all out.
He then sent out what made me begin to cry.
"robert sent out LYDIA!"
A picture of my girlfriend appeared.
She was crying though, and it then said,
"LYDIA used heart breaker!"
I thought "that's not a move"
I then fainted and it said:
"Goodbye, Harvey. You lose!"

I couldn't take it anymore, so I turned the DS off, removed the card and put it in the bin.
I told my mum that it broke, so I didn't have to tell her what happened.
I never used my DS again for 3 weeks after that, and with a new Acekard2i, I put it in and it said,
"robert is watching...."
but then let me choose my game.

Never again did I buy any DS game from ebay, and never again did I have any problems.

I still wonder how it knew all this though....

THE END
Pretty good... However not too realistic, we have heard the "HE KNOWS WHO I AM OMG HOW ITS JSUT A GAME!" before, overall very nice though.

560cool.

An old timer?

Age 24
Male
Eastern Europe
Seen March 29th, 2021
Posted March 9th, 2021
2,002 posts
13.7 Years
Don't punch me, please. I will post this as a .docx file on the attachments, okay ?
Just so I can keep that creepy font, pls ? >>'
Oh, I am also posting this on the main thread so that everyone can see it ! ^_^
Well, okay. I'm here just to chat with people. Don't really care about signatures and stuff.



Male
Ever Grande City, Hoenn
Seen February 26th, 2011
Posted November 8th, 2010
768 posts
13 Years
Incase anybody doesnt have word, here is 560Cool's creepypasta:
Spoiler:
Mt. Pyre’s Duskulls
It was past 12 AM. I was reading some creepypastas, you know, scary stories about games, with my netbook. I refreshed the website’s page once because it didn’t load properly. I noticed the blinking red “New” text next to a creepypasta named… Mt. Pyre’s Duskulls…

My first thought was that the writer was inspired from the creepypasta about Duskull’s evolution. I found that story creepy too, so I pushed on.

I rarely even notice Gen III creepypastas, so I decide it should give me a good read. When I clicked the page, I was greeted with a 404. Great. And I actually wanted to read that thing.

Several weeks later, I had forgot about those that happened back then. Mt. Pyre’s Duskulls was no longer in the creepypasta list, so I didn’t remember anything. I grabbed my backpack which had my Sapphire game, just received from a friend I had borrowed it to. For the heck of it, I wanted to see what he did on his Pokemon adventure. Even now, I wished I pressed the New Game button instead of Continue…

I plugged the game into my broken DS Lite, broken meaning the upper screen was completely shattered. I used it from the time to time when I was too lazy to search for my SP, so I started playing. I was greeted with the boring intro with May, and stuff. The actual odd thing was the fact that I was unable to skip through the intro ; I would press A, B or Start, but the DS didn’t react. I thought my friend screwed it up a little, but I wasn’t mad. Not at all, really.

The intro sequence ended, and a message appeared when the game begun. It sent chills down my spine, and I mean, really cold ones. It read :

“I made this just for you. Don’t miss it, hehe…”

I think it was his sadistic mind that caused him to screw my first Pokemon game. Anyways, the options showed up, and I pressed Continue. Everything seemed normal, I was in Mt. Pyre, oddly (what a sadistic ****, haha). I checked his trainer card. Those were his stats :

Name : Cristi. Nothing to see here. His nickname.
Playtime : 6:66 what the ****… 6 hours into the game, and already at Mt. Pyre ?
Badges : 6. Once again, stupid. But normal. You’re supposed to have six badges by Lilycove…

So, with those in mind, I checked his Pokemon. They were all Duskulls, named EVOLVE. Now, I was indeed scared, remembering the creepypasta I wanted to read a few weeks ago. I got incredibly scared.

I decided it was time to move, to actually do something. So I did, I pushed towards the top. He wasn’t very far either, but as I was progressing, I noticed how my Overworld was starting to change color : step by step, more pixels were turning gray, while my eyes were turning a pale white, with a black spot on the middle. When I reached the top, a textbox appeared :

“We are now one.
And I shall command from now on. Okay, Cristi ?
Yes, Master…
Good, nice going… My first command would be jumping off this cliff. How about it ?
As you wish, my lord…”

I watched the Dusclops sprite disappear, and then to reappear in a sequence at the bottom.


“Good, you have proven worthy… now, let’s conquer this region, and own every Pokemon !
Okay…”

I was now allowed to roam free. Hoenn was mine, and the roster wasn’t made up of Duskulls : it was a single Dusclops… named Cristi. It was at Lv. 100, and, amongst other moves, knew Perish Song, which now had 100 PP and had the following description :

“It instantly kills the foe.”

At this point, I was thinking that my friend got bored and hacked into this game. I decided to play his hack, and, it all acted normally, except for phrases such as “Hello, TRAINER !” were now turned into “Hello, POKEMON !”. Only when I reached Steven the dialogue was different. I took the time to log everything is the conversation after an easy fight against the champion.

“You…you have no right to become a champion ! You are just a free Pokemon !”
“I am not, Steven. It’s me, Cristi. A Duskull took control over me, and I helped him evolve… we eventually arrived here, only to become champions. Now, hand over that diploma and the title of a Champion, and you won’t die like your Pokemon !”
“Oh… okay, whatever… here…”

At this point, the screen turned black. It would always get stuck here, unless I turned off my DS and restarted. That would cause a new game.

Seems like Dusclops was the Leader of the Elite 4 until Wallace came and beat him. Steven went off on a journey to train more. He had to be much stronger…

Only then I realized what had happened : this was a telling of what happened after a Duskull took control over a human in order to evolve – two brains, a single person…

My friend only knew that he liked Dusclops and found him awesome, that’s it. He never reacalled playing around with my Sapphire, or doing a hack of it.

The fact that Perish Song was so overpowered was weird too : I recalling overpowered was weird too : I recalling my friend using it in Wi-Fi battles against me and raving about how awesome it is working with Mean Look. I still can’t remember if the Duskull line can learn that move without cheats.

Maybe the Duskull erased his mind… who knows ?
END

Oh, and credits :

Hybrid Trainer : for bringing creepypastas into PC – a great achievement indeed.
-writer of the creepypasta about Duskull and his evolution method- : inspiration for this !
Me : for being able to write this ! :]

560cool.

An old timer?

Age 24
Male
Eastern Europe
Seen March 29th, 2021
Posted March 9th, 2021
2,002 posts
13.7 Years
Thanks saber !
Nice chosen font as well ! ;-)
I made a few typos. Here's the fixes. Would you mind updating ? :

"The fact that Perish Song was overpowered was weird too : I totally hate that move. I recall Cristi using it against me in Wi-Fi ..."

And, feel free to add yourself into the credits. :] For organizing this monthly competition and putting my pasta on an actual post !
Well, okay. I'm here just to chat with people. Don't really care about signatures and stuff.



Age 26
Male
Seen June 6th, 2017
Posted October 9th, 2016
1,162 posts
13.2 Years
Generation 3 Creepypasta-The Ninetales Curse.'

Now there are some Pokemon I dislike, but there is one I absolutely loathe: Vulpix.
Ninetales looks okay, but its no where as ugly as vulpix. God, I can't even stand looking at them. So here's what I did back in the first generation. I would catch a vulpix and then release it then use my Lv. 100 Blastoise and crush a wild vulpix. Oh boy I got good laughs from that. Anyhow, I was kind of pissed when I heard Vulpix and Ninetales would be in the new games ruby and sapphire, I figured I'd just ignore them or something. Anyhow I didn't want to spend the cash on the games so I figured I'd call my cousin, he was an avid collector and already had numerous copies of the Japanese 3rd generation games. I called him to borrow a game, but he said he had save files with lots of Pokemon on most of them, but I could borrow one glitchy one that he had never used much, but said it works fine other than that the title screens says Pokemon Red Version other than Pokemon Ruby Version. He said I could use it if I don't lose it and delete my save afterwards, as it is a collector's item. When I got the game I was really excited and picked the water starter mudkip (or mudkipz as some of you from 4chan liek to say). I soon raised it up to a swampert and caught some other powerful Pokemon as well. I was going to a place called mount pyre next, and I'll admit the name creeped me out. I was hoping to find some ghost Pokemon there as ghost is one of my favorite types-second only to water. I caught a Duskull and named it Luna, who I later trained up to a Dusclops. Anyhow as I was ascending the mountain I saw a vulpix, but it had the cry of a ninetales. I bashed it harshly with my Swampert and trekked on. I heard Pokemon cries in the background of mount pyre, and it seemed to get strange. I called my cousin and he said they had random Pokemon cries in the background of most games. Though I never mentioned how ninetales's cry was the only one I heard. I was almost at the top when another vulpix appeared, with a ninetales cry as well. When I tried to run it didn't leave the battle and did damage to the vulpix. Then, with minimal health the vulpix attacked, but it said "Ninetales used curse". The run and kill glitch finished it but I went back to my PC to get my Dusclops out of my box to fight team magma. Only it wasn't there, and the PC showed my whole party was fainted although they were at full health all the way through the mount pyre event. And when I went to check the PC box, I had all Ninetales. They had odd nicknames that didn't make sense. That was, until I put the nicknames together.

If
You
Choose
To
Provoke
Ninetales
Then
You
Will
Be
Afflicted
With
A
Horrible
Curse
That
Will
Hurt
You
And
Your
Pokemon
For
All
Of
Eternity
And
Even
After
That

I never played a game with Vulpix or Ninetales in the regional dex ever again.

paired to kaori & vrai
Male
Ever Grande City, Hoenn
Seen February 26th, 2011
Posted November 8th, 2010
768 posts
13 Years
Generation 3 Creepypasta-The Ninetales Curse.'

Now there are some Pokemon I dislike, but there is one I absolutely loathe: Vulpix.
Ninetales looks okay, but its no where as ugly as vulpix. God, I can't even stand looking at them. So here's what I did back in the first generation. I would catch a vulpix and then release it then use my Lv. 100 Blastoise and crush a wild vulpix. Oh boy I got good laughs from that. Anyhow, I was kind of pissed when I heard Vulpix and Ninetales would be in the new games ruby and sapphire, I figured I'd just ignore them or something. Anyhow I didn't want to spend the cash on the games so I figured I'd call my cousin, he was an avid collector and already had numerous copies of the Japanese 3rd generation games. I called him to borrow a game, but he said he had save files with lots of Pokemon on most of them, but I could borrow one glitchy one that he had never used much, but said it works fine other than that the title screens says Pokemon Red Version other than Pokemon Ruby Version. He said I could use it if I don't lose it and delete my save afterwards, as it is a collector's item. When I got the game I was really excited and picked the water starter mudkip (or mudkipz as some of you from 4chan liek to say). I soon raised it up to a swampert and caught some other powerful Pokemon as well. I was going to a place called mount pyre next, and I'll admit the name creeped me out. I was hoping to find some ghost Pokemon there as ghost is one of my favorite types-second only to water. I caught a Duskull and named it Luna, who I later trained up to a Dusclops. Anyhow as I was ascending the mountain I saw a vulpix, but it had the cry of a ninetales. I bashed it harshly with my Swampert and trekked on. I heard Pokemon cries in the background of mount pyre, and it seemed to get strange. I called my cousin and he said they had random Pokemon cries in the background of most games. Though I never mentioned how ninetales's cry was the only one I heard. I was almost at the top when another vulpix appeared, with a ninetales cry as well. When I tried to run it didn't leave the battle and did damage to the vulpix. Then, with minimal health the vulpix attacked, but it said "Ninetales used curse". The run and kill glitch finished it but I went back to my PC to get my Dusclops out of my box to fight team magma. Only it wasn't there, and the PC showed my whole party was fainted although they were at full health all the way through the mount pyre event. And when I went to check the PC box, I had all Ninetales. They had odd nicknames that didn't make sense. That was, until I put the nicknames together.

If
You
Choose
To
Provoke
Ninetales
Then
You
Will
Be
Afflicted
With
A
Horrible
Curse
That
Will
Hurt
You
And
Your
Pokemon
For
All
Of
Eternity
And
Even
After
That

I never played a game with Vulpix or Ninetales in the regional dex ever again.
Meh, I've heard that type of story before, but you really made this one more realistic! Congrats!
Male
South Carolina, US
Seen September 23rd, 2016
Posted September 19th, 2016
222 posts
13.8 Years
This is entierly original and fiction, no animas were harmed in the making of this story

Okay so i have cats and whenever i watch the pokemon anime or play any games from the 3rd generation one that i named Purgle comes close to me and curls up and watchs me play/watchs the show. When generation 4 started leaking over the internet the cat began bleeding randomly. I first discovered this when watching a youtube video about people who fake pokemon of the next generations to scam money off of idiots, she jumped up onto my desk and sat on the keyboard which closed the window that the video was in, i thought this was a coincidince until i opened it again and she began yowling, i picked her up and set her down by her food but as i was walking away i noticed a stream of blood going down my arm, i thought this was a scratch but i saw no cut on my arm and i looked at the cat which had no scratch either, i couldn't tell if she had any blood on her cuz she was a dark brown cat. Anyway i closed the door to my room and continued watching videos until i came to a related video that was about meowth, it said meowth was going to be a regional pokemon for pokemon diamond if one of the developers daughters survives her diabetes, if not meowth would be replaced by an evolution chain of an ugly and pretty cat to show how something so beautiful can loose it's beauty in a matter of seconds, I brushed this off as a stupid rumor knowing noone wwould be cruel enough to base a pokemon off of death.

Of course i forgot about that whole day all together when i pre-ordered pokemon Diamond. As soon as i came home that day my whole floor of my room was covered in a pea green mush, it took me a while to realize this was puke of an animal. I looked in my closet where Purgle was laying skinny, and weak. My mom and i ran to the car and took her to the vet immediately and the vet said that she was suffering from Diabetes, i then asked the vet why she had puked all over, the vet came to our house to see exactly how much it had regurgitated. As soon as the vet walked into my room she screamed and said that she had only seen this two other times.

She then asked me if i play Pokemon games, i said yes, then she gave me an ominous look and began describing that whenever a new generation came out a pet always did this, a boy named Pete, who worked on a farm lost his favorite cow named Tanky when gen 2 came out, and an aquarium in San Fransisco had lost a shark named Sharp all owners had had some reference to Pokemon, Pete had been a huge fan of gen 1, and the owner of the aquarium had sold bootleg copies of Pokemon Crystal to raise money for the aquarium.

Then i remembered that story about the Meowth i soon realized i was the proud owner of the third animal. I asked the doctor how these animals had died, she said the owners were too stunned by the death to answer those same questions. Then my Pre-ordered copy of Pokemon Diamond came in the mail, I immediately threw it away when i came back into my room to check on Purgle i found out i wasn't the proud owner of the third animal anymore, I was the proud owner of a large, purple, rabies infected cat. That summer we gave her away to a cat breeder because he was willing to pay thousands of dollars thinking she was some new kind of cat, he told us that the new kittens looked GLAMOROUS .
Section Eight
Seen May 19th, 2012
Posted May 18th, 2012
1,069 posts
13 Years
For a bit of criticism...

I know that it's really easy to just belt out a long CreepyPasta in one block, but...

A little formatting and grammar goes a LOOOOOONG way. I skipped over the last two simply because the organization made them too hard to read.


"I don't find my name tasteful next to Shanghai Alice."
-STRATOS99
Age 29
Female
Seen November 5th, 2010
Posted November 5th, 2010
180 posts
12.7 Years
Im going to have to agree with Shanghai... It's difficult to read a wall of text. Line after line confuses a lot of people.
[ p a r a d e ]
of destiny

The sovereign parade of destiny
infiltrates the society of the
human thought. The parade

that travels throughout the
mind affects you in a negative,

undesirable control.


Male
Seen January 18th, 2016
Posted October 11th, 2015
64 posts
14.7 Years
Okay, I'm new here but I really love horror stories so I'll attempt this.

Spoiler:

25 years ago, a young man named Arnold Evelyn was walking through a forest by the outside of Azalea Town. He was a builder who had recently finished his latest project the SOLPOK Well on the eastern edge of the small town. SOLPOC was the name of the company he worked for: Southern Order of Luxury Pokemon Origin Construction. Which meant they built Wells for Southern regions.
His boss, Leonardo had left him in charge of the well construction when he went home to be with his sick daughter, Eloise. He had promised to return to the Forest of Ilex Flowers (Holly).
It was now December 19th, and the Holly was in bloom in the center of the forest, where there was enough light, water, and spacious soil for the flowers to grow with intensely vivid Colors.
He awaited his boss and friedn Leonardo to return to this forest clearing. Leonardo had sent a letter the day before saying he had been already in the Town of New Bark, and headed to Cherrygrove. In the time for Arnlod to recieve the letter, Leonardo should have already made it to the Union Cave.
All day Arnold awaited his friend's arrival, and almost all the night through he stay in the clearing.
At the stroke of midnight, he packed up his things and headed back south to Azalea. As he walked through the dark forest, Noctowl and murkrow calling out into the night, he found the path that led to the Town, and he walked down the path. He walked longer and longer, until he reached a giant willow tree in the way.
He looked down to see himself still on the path, but alas, must have been on the wrong one. He whispered to himself a quiet curse, and strolled back the way he had come. He looked for any crossroad where he might have gone the wrong way, but none appeared.
Only after a long period of walking, he stumbled upon a cliff. He knew that south of the town and forest was a giant cliff, but it was much to south to be where he was.
He stepped back. His shoes the only sound. He again heard the bird pokemon crying out, bugs scuttling along the ground, wind whistling through the trees.
He had been walking for one hour now, and knew that the sun would not rise for atleast five more. When he found a small spot covered from wind, he put down his things and lay on his back pack as a pillow.
For a while he sang sweet melodies of the songs he learned as a child, in hopes to raise his spirits of being lost. He took out his three pokeballs, and sent out his pokemon - Croconaw, Graveler, and Ariados. Together they all laid under the tree. The tree that was the big willow.
He lay restlestly on the cold hard grass floor. The three pokemon sound asleep around each other. He began to grow cold. Of course, all his pokemon could do was guard him, as alligators and spiders are cold blooded, and rocks as cold as the ones beneath him.
So he lay there, cold, sleepless, and slightly afraid of his situation. By now, even the bird pokemon had gone to sleep, or atleast had flown away to catch a midnight snack.
The forest was completely silent.
Suddenly there was a sharp pain in his back. He had been stabbed by a monster! Or so he thought. He looked back and saw that a Paras had clasped on him in the night. He laughed at himself for being so foolish and let the paras have it's spot on the tree. He left his pokemon, and went to find a nearby tree that would help protect him from the wind.
It was now apparent that he had fallen asleep, even briefly, as the wind had picked up drastically since he lay down. He found another tree, much smaller, and much colder. Still it provided protection so he lay there. As he was settling off to sleep, something punded on his back. He got up startled, and told himself to stop being foolish.
But then, the trees around him, arranged in a circle all rised up. He could see monstrous, powerful faces on the tree monsters, all angered as he slept on one. He stumbled over rapidly to get his things and pokemon, but the trees chased after him surprisingly swiftly. He ducked below a branch, and awakened his pokemon. He heard thunder crackle.
He returned the pokemon to their pokeballs and took off running. Running as fast as the lightning that was now striking in the area. Each lightning strike was incredibly powerful, blinding him, and defeaning him for a short moment, and the earth crackled as if a giant beast of lightning were chasing after him. He ran faster, as he still saw the trees behind him. He found a cave and ran inside, then he saw the trees run past. He still didn't know what kind of evil beings they were, but of course, the were simply angered sudowoodo.
The night went on, and as rain pounded down, water flowed into the cave. He and his pokemon wandered through the cave, and ran into a crossroads, as the cave filled with more water, he ran left, the downwards path, and into a darker cavern. The water still came rushing down, but he found a tall ledge and climbed up, another ledge, and another. the water filled at the bottom as a small lake, leading of in streams throughout the cave. He ran forward as the water stopped following him. then he saw why. a large crack had led the water to a gigantic reservoir of water, with a large pump connected to the center. the Pump read SOLPOC.
He was in the well, he had found a cave that led back to the well. He now fearlessly strolled through the caves as he knew all the various chambers from there. Then he felt his feet damp, a small splashing noise where he walked, it was dark, but he could see that the water from the reservoir was rising. He knew it was still a long way to get to the surface, and he started to walk faster. Then a giant wave surged forward from where he came and he started running again. He ran past a cavern, and many other parts of the tunnels he didn't recognize. He was almost to the exit when he found a small temple. With lights on.
He ran there and found that one exit had crumbled down. He ran to the chapel and in there he found a man. Leonardo, of course. He ran to him and shook him violently. He began to yell "YOU DID THIS TO ME!"
"IF YOU HAD MADE IT TO THE FOREST..." he stopped. He saw his friend's face horribly mangled. "Leonardo?" he cried
"It's too late for your friend, Arnold."
"Who are you?"
"I'm the one that killed your friend. Isn't that obvious."
Then a figure stepped out from the shade.
"I tried to kill you with the storm. Of course I can control water, and I will flood this town before I let you go free."
"Why are you doing this to us?! What did we do?!"
"Nothing you did yourself. Something your people had done to us for years.
We don't like having our tails cut off as slowpokes!"
The Slowking started to scream an evil laugh.
Then Arnold tried to run. He screamed "I'M SORRY!" But the Slowking made the boulders fall. Water exploded in. The boulders prevented him from escaping, and he started to float up. Slowking was there in a second.
"I will enjoy killing you all, Arnold."
The chamber filled with water, the Slowking smiling, as Arnold floated to the surface, trying to get air. The slowking used it's psychic and flung the man against the surface. Then with a Final Zen Headbutt, Arnold lay on the ceiling, a bloody dead body, with Leonardo next to him, when a beast broke through the chamber.
The Beast may have been lightning itself, thunder patterns, sparking teeth, even one paw in the water would have Electrocuted them.
Raikou.
Raikou Pounced on the Slowking, the guardian of storms fighting the creator of the rain. With a super powered Thunder, SLowking also drifted to the surface.
The water drained down, outside the storm settled. From far corners of the room, Slowpoke, and slowbro crawled out to help their fallen leader.
Azalea was saved by the legend of thunder.
But damage was already done. it took 20 years to fix the city, and every resident had died from slowking's doings. Except one, a 15 year old boy. Named Giovanni. He swore to destroy slowking, and that he would again punish slowpoke by taking the tails. But eventually his revenge on slowpoke, became his own doing, not for love of family, but to have control over beast of powerful storms.
Every Slowpoke Giovanni Hurts, may find a kings rock. If they do, Slowking will have revenge again. And the storm of death, will kill again.

-BLAZEQUAZA

MasterSceptile

Pokémon Master/Glitch Hunter

Age 28
Male
Seen January 9th, 2019
Posted December 4th, 2010
29 posts
12.9 Years
We all know who Pokémon Trainer Red is. He’s the protagonist from the 1st generation games who becomes champion of Kanto only to wind up on at Mt. Silver in the 2nd generation, saying only, “…”. Now many say that he was always a mute, but that can’t be as he always called the name of the Pokémon he sent out into battle. Without those little details told, let this pasta began…

Spoiler:
We all know the rumors of the mysterious things that are send to be hidden in Kanto, waiting for someone powerful enough to stumble upon it… or foolish enough. There once was a boy, and a very strong one at that, who stumbled into a land where he didn’t belong, and he paid the price.

He was merely walked down a typical route, when he stumbled upon a man. A man with a look without emotion, almost in a possessed trance, blood all over with gashes on his face. The man walked up to Red, placed a stone into his hand, and collapsed. He was dead.

Red, completely freaked out by this, ran away from the scene, though he still held the stone that the man had left in his hand.

After running for what seemed like forever, Red finally stopped to catch his breath. After a short break, he took a look at the stone in his hand. It had been stained with some of the blood of the old man, but what Red wanted to know was what the stone could do. He called out three of his Pokémon.

“Go! Venusaur! Blastoise! Charizard!” said Red, releasing his powerful creatures.

The Pokémon trio approached Red, as if they were immediately drawn to the stone.

“Hey, watch out guys. Who knows what this thing is.” said Red again, trying to figure out what the stone was.

The trio ignored him and continued forward. The stone flew out of Red’s hands and drifted in front of the trio, whom stopped as the stone hovered in front of their combined gaze.

Suddenly, all three Pokémon began to glow white. They were… evolving?

“What? No way! They’re already in their final evolution forms! What could that stone be doing to them?” said Red, who had so many questions, with so little answers; only staring at the sight of his evolving Pokémon. But these were no normal evolutions.

As the Pokémon finally became visible, Red did his best not to scream in terror of what had just happened to his companions.

Venusaur was no more. His entire body had morphed into something else. He now stood, what appeared to be, over 20 feet tall. His legs were now the size, and form, of trees. It stood with a long, green neck to stretch out, bearing a displeased face, with red eyes and hundreds of vines rising from its back.

The others were no better. They shared their 20 foot heights and their red eyes with each other. Charizard’s head had gained a third horn in the middle, which completely rearranged his face, along with large spikes on his back, which was completely on fire. Blastoise was the most intact, though he had gained two more hydro cannons on his back. Red looked back at the stone, only to see that it had exploded into a veil of mist, which floated away.

Beginning to panic even more, Red took out his Pokédex and pointed it at the beasts, only to receive static.

“Wha-what are you things?” said Red, frightened.

“We are those, whom you humans claimed, did not exist.” responded the trio, in booming voices that almost shattered Red’s eardrums.

Red was stunned by the fact that these “things” had just spoken back to him, but he was even more concerned with what they wanted.

“What do you want from me?” he said, weakly.

“…Revenge.” said the evolved Charizard, looking like it was ready to toast Red, right there.

The trio lifted Red with a psychic force and proceeded to rise off of the ground. Red, panicking, screamed out for help, feeling lucky that he had spotted an old man walking by. In fact, it seemed to be that crazy old man from Viridian City who was obsessed with coffee and catching weak Pokémon.

The old man did not response. In fact, it didn’t seem like he even noticed the 20 foot megaliths the stood right in front of him. However, before Red could finish his second call for help, the old man turned to stare up at him, with the same red eyes as the beasts.

Red whited out.

When he awoke, he found himself in a realm that seemed to be his world, but destroyed. Buildings were in pieces, the sky looked like static, and there wasn’t a soul in sight, not even his evolved Pokémon that brought him here.

“Whe-where am I?” asked Red.

Suddenly, there was a demonic chuckle and a twisted voice from what seemed to be a very close distance.

“Kekeke… our world.” said the voice.

Red turned in surprise, to find what looked like a walking corpse, the size of a normal human, but with giant needles for arms.

“They said that I was just a typo of another fake… They called us all fakes. Rumors. Myths. They never truly believed in us and would even mock anyone who did!”
continued the voice, growing ever more twisted.

Red was still growing confused, even to the point of insanity, whether it would be caused by his confusion or this strange creature.

“Who are you?!” Red snapped.

Before Red could even blink, the corpse had delivered a giant slash across his body, obviously fatal. However, he lived. As Red was screaming his lungs out, his body was rebuilding, painfully. Finally, it had been repaired, but by what?

Before Red could ask what had happened, though fearful of the consequence of another question, the corpse spoke again.

“Excellent. Much like us, you are in a world where you cannot die, however, you still feel all the pain you would normally,” the corpse began, “if not, even worse.”

The corpse stared at Red, who was now completely silent, and gave him an order.

“Come follow me, there is someone waiting for you Red.” spoke the corpse, in a very soft, wind-like voice.

Red was about to ask how this thing knew his name, but he was too frightened and proceeded to follow the corpse.

Eventually, they reached what appeared to be an even more grim section of the world, this dimension’s Lavender Town. The entire place was a mass graveyard.

They stepped forward to a grave stone that was much larger than any other. Red began to read the inscription:

Doomsday

‘What is that suppose to mean?’ thought Red.

Suddenly, the graveyard started to shake. A large figure began to rise out of the ground. The figure appeared to be a giant assortment of bones that formed some sort of head, but what shocked Red was this new creature’s height. It had to be at least 90 feet tall, but it was as transparent as a ghost.

“Master,” began the corpse, “I have brought forth this boy. He was sent here after he evolved some of his creatures with the Mist Stone.”

‘Mist Stone?’ questioned Red to himself.

Suddenly, the loud roar came from the massive beast, causing Red’s ears to start dripping blood.

“Is this one of those who called us fakes? Myths? Nothing but works of fantasy?!” the voice growing more annoying with every word.

“Indeed,” said the corpse.

The large creature, Doomsday as the grave stated, let out a demonic laugh, even more powerful than the corpses.

“Then I guess this boy wouldn’t mind knowing the truth before he is sent to his punishment.” said Doomsday.

“T-t-tru-truth?” said Red, stuttering his first words against Doomsday.

“Of course!” boomed his voice, “You probably believe that Arceus created the universe don’t you?”

“Well…” began Red.

“Of course you do! That’s what they tell you to believe, because he is the divine Pokémon, the Pokégod!” continued Doomsday, once again raising his pitch. I’ll tell you the difference between us and Arceus, kid. Arceus can be defeated, captured, and even used by morals. While we… we are INVINCIBLE! We can’t be captured because you morals don’t even acknowledge our existence!” finished Doomsday.

“But…” began Red, only to be cut off, once again.

Doomsday rammed one of its sharp bones, straight through Red’s body, knowing that he could recover, all just to make him suffer. Red winced, but did not scream, he couldn’t. He just let his body regenerate, once again.

“Enough talk,” began Doomsday, “it’s time for you to face your worst nightmare.”

Suddenly, other strange creatures began to crawl out of the ground. They grabbed at Red, who tried to run, but could not. He could not escape his fate. The creatures that grabbed at him where much like his Pokémon trio, as they seemed to be the evolved forms of other Pokémon, without evolutions.

Before he knew it, Doomsday tore a rift in existence which began to consume Red. Red fought with all the energy he had left, but was no match for that, which he did not understand. He closed his eyes and was swallowed up by the rift.

When he woke up again, Red was at the peak of a snowy mountain. In fact, for a second, he believed that he saw what looked like the Indigo Plateau in the short distance. However that all was wiped from his mind when he looked straight off the side of the mountain. He saw Doomsday, the corpse, his evolved trio, and many other creatures, some that were those that came out of the ground and others which he had not seen before. They were all laughing at him.

“Come follow me Red, and you can fulfill your destiny. Just come follow me.” spoke Doomsday, motioning Red to come to him.

Red, having lost all control of his body, ran right for the creatures. He jumped off the peak, lunging toward the beasts… who vanished. Red continued to fall, unable to unsee the creatures that now tormented him.

“Welcome to your new home Red...” began Doomsday’s voice, “You are ours now.”

Red found himself, no longer falling, but back on the mountain’s peak. He tried to speak, but nothing came out. He tried to leave the peak, but he could not. He was trapped on the mountain forever, and he could not leave. He was where his masters had put him, to live out the rest of eternity.

Many trainers came to face Red, all of which were vastly inferior to him… and yet they still beat him. It was that day, when the Johto boy beat him, that he truly knew what his punishment from the Pokégods was.

He was going to forever have to do the one thing that he had never done, nor wanted to do.

Lose.



He was destined to be the very best, now cursed to fail for all eternity.


MasterSceptile
Seen April 24th, 2021
Posted November 9th, 2017
214 posts
14.2 Years
Here's mine but there are no spoilers thing. Sorry, can't figure out how to work that thing.

The Curse of Pirated Pokemon Games

So a normal day on Christmas, just wakin' up to see what I got. As you don't know, I collect PKMN games. Every single one, I try. INCLUDING Naranja, Darkcry, ShinyGold, etc. My parents know that, they don't care. You can guess my surprise when my parents give me the 2nd Gen and Green. Green was in JAPANESE. Pretty rare, I must say. I booted up Crystal first, that was my favorite game. The title screen just said "PoketMosntrCrystl" and "press any button". And instead of Oak, the roles were reversed. You were a PKMN, trying to beat the the Elite 4. I knew it was hacked, so i saved pulled it out and played Green. I'm going to regret this for the rest of my life. So I notice it's the same thing, played all the other games. Get all my other 3 GBAs and connect them all w/ the 4 games inside. It started up and the games merged into 1. It was called PKMN GREY. No title screen, just "Continue" The previous player had maybe 1:00 and he had 8 badges. I thought, "Meh, he did a speed run." I see the party, all LVL100. His name is "yurbeinwatchd" I go back and everything instead of color is Black and Grey. So it transported me to Lavender Town, it starts to get creepy. The music is slowed down and played backwards, the nicknames are no "LEAVE and NOW", and when i tried to walk out, nothing. You can only go to the graves and then the game takes over. You see all the 1st Gen trainers and then they say " You tried to kill us, maybe it should be the reversed order now!" At that poin, I put down the game and threw it out, including the GBA. I didn't tell anybody.