1. Use proper grammar.
jesus truely lives; in us. do not deny him. let him into you.
be christians so that we together can build a new and effective world.
The first line was okay, but the second one
is not. Are you encouraging conversion or something?
let the evil in them silence to death. but not them.
Even though, the 'poem' as a whole isn't really nice, but this particular line is great. XD