My Poem about the Soul

Started by Star Crossed Dreamer November 26th, 2004 11:46 PM
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Posted December 18th, 2005
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I just wrote this poem. It's about the soul. It may be deep to some of you and to others it may not be. Just know that this poem comes from my heart and my own soul.


The Soul
What is the soul?
Does anyone truly know,
the depth of the soul?
It's been said,
that the soul has many faces.
Darkness, light, empty, full.
The soul has many faces,
so which is the true face,
of the soul?
To be honest,
there is no one true face,
no one true soul.
For if all souls,
were one and the same.
How could anyone say,
that they have a soul to this day?


That's the end of my poem. I hope you all like it! :D
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Posted January 19th, 2008
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it was pretty good. the only complaint i have is that you put little cruvy thingies (i forget what their called, XD) in some places where you dont need them. but i still like it.^^

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It was a good poem, but it seems that there is too much to confuse the reader (well me anyway), and it took a few times to actully understand what your talking about.

It really does make you wonder sometimes, what is the "soul"? And even more, "whats the meaning of life?" Enough of my rambling XD, it was good.
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Seen July 8th, 2009
Posted December 18th, 2005
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Thanks for the nice comments you three. I'm glad you liked it. The commas I put there because sometimes they are used like that I believe. I hope more people read thi! :D
After being a member for so long, I have lost interest in this place. I've had alot of good times here, and bad ones too. I will not forget anyone from here. This is my final goodbye, and farewell.
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Posted May 18th, 2007
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I have seen the poem before Ricky. As i said before ti made me think about a lot of things. Over all it is a good poem.
As for my soul the only comment i got it that it might be a dark or confused soul. Though i never realy take note to what others tell me. That realy confuse me then or any one. For there will always be people that like you and see your light and then others that hate you and only see the dark.

I have found my fist account(in the new forum-can't go all the way back XD) So i am going to stick with that one. I miss it so. Please don't PM this one.