I started writing

Started by Zeffy October 13th, 2010 2:44 AM
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Zeffy

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Posted January 30th, 2021
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I Started Writing

It was during this night, colder than ever.
I saw a pen, and beside was a paper.
My mind flew, my imagination ran wild.
Something took me ablew, and I never did mind.

I can't take it anymore, I took the pen.
I grabbed the paper, the oh so empty paper.
I wrote down everything, everything my heart desires.

After a little while, I realized that I'm done.
And that was the time, the time I need to sleep.
So this poem came to life, but I need to get some sleep.
I kept it in my fife, and forever it will be in my keep.


Its pretty crappy if I say so myself. I made it at school, our English teacher was rushing us to make a poem with the topic of "writing". ;~;
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Posted February 2nd, 2017
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...Interesting. A piece of poetry that is about poetry. It's amusing.
You did quite an awesome job on the poem.
The last stanza sounded strange to read. But I don't blame you, after all, your teacher was rushing you to make a poem, right?
Not to be rude, but, unless you have great talent and skill, a poem should never be rushed. It takes time and thinking to make one sound wonderful.
Again, you did a great (and unique) job!
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Seen November 1st, 2012
Posted July 7th, 2011
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...Interesting. A piece of poetry that is about poetry. It's amusing.
You did quite an awesome job on the poem.
The last stanza sounded strange to read. But I don't blame you, after all, your teacher was rushing you to make a poem, right?
Not to be rude, but, unless you have great talent and skill, a poem should never be rushed. It takes time and thinking to make one sound wonderful.
Again, you did a great (and unique) job!


Yeah, but you know. It happens a lot at school. You often end up doing things you don't wanna do right now. Specially about literature. Poems, essays, that kind of things.


By the way, the poem is pretty cool. Art about art is always something interesting to read.
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Zeffy

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Seen December 1st, 2022
Posted January 30th, 2021
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...Interesting. A piece of poetry that is about poetry. It's amusing.
You did quite an awesome job on the poem.
The last stanza sounded strange to read. But I don't blame you, after all, your teacher was rushing you to make a poem, right?
Not to be rude, but, unless you have great talent and skill, a poem should never be rushed. It takes time and thinking to make one sound wonderful.
Again, you did a great (and unique) job!
It happens a lot during my English class. ;~;
My teacher was like "HURRY UP! LATE PAPERS WON'T BE ACCEPTED AND THOSE LATE PAPERS WILL BE MARKED F AND YOU WILL NEVER GET TO TAKE THE EXAM NEXT WEEK!" so I rushed it, and the end part was the really rushed one. :'(