A Hollow Heart Echos..

Started by FlameDancer October 15th, 2010 8:17 PM
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Seen December 21st, 2010
Posted October 15th, 2010
41 posts
12.7 Years
A Hollow Heart Echos..

Drawing black circles
Into blue eyes
In pictures of you

I won't desecrate your name
Into a poem
That doesn't see thru
The color of your eyes

I know not the future
And the present is black
She has never felt my touch
And so i do not know
How gentle she really is

There is nothing
That i can say that will
Rise from the pit of my stomach
And escape from my faded smile
To capture her eyes

Thumbs seperate
These pictures of you
Brush over over your cheeks
Press against your heart
Tearing apart painful remeinders
Of broken men in pieces
Who wept for you
As the days closed in
Mumbling sweet nothings
While I waited

Now you can see why
Every shard of my heart
On the floor
Still gleaming
The reflection
Of your empty presence
Still breaks my skin
Every so often.
I LOVE FROGS AND THE COLOR GREEN.
Age 28
Male
'.' Why would I say?
Seen January 4th, 2013
Posted December 25th, 2010
71 posts
12.6 Years
This is amazing, the sadness touched upon my soul <3 *bookmarked* I particularly loved:

Every shard of my heart
On the floor
Still gleaming
By the way (simple typo, no big deal):
Tearing apart painful remeinders
Reminders is spelled..er...reminders. xD
Life is like a box of glitter. 'Tis shiny. :3
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We were just hit with llamas on flaming bricks."
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