Recreational Thoughts

Started by Zeffy October 16th, 2010 5:23 AM
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Zeffy

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Recreational Thoughts

Like a plane losing its control,
my love is crashing towards you.
Pitiful, so it may seem
but I'm falling for you.

Your soft, warming eyes,
and your lips that shine.
It seems that a kiss,
simply a kiss would make me fall.

In my thoughts you appear,
in my imagination, you become real.
I can't let you go,
simply not like this.
I love you so much,
that if you'd leave me...I'd die.

Meh, another rushed work from my English subject. xD
Gosh, she's making us do stuff like this lately. xD
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The title, well, was said by the most dear person to me IRL. That phrase that she gave me, gave me this idea while my teacher said to write a poem about romance and so...I used it. xD
Oh my!
...That is just beautiful!

:cer_love:

Has he read this poem?
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Why does your gender say "Female" then?
they see me trollin'~

Nice poem, Zeffers. There's this unexplainable awesomeness about it...but that could just be me being silly and romantic haha. It doesn't sound very rushed, though. :D
Everything ends,
and that's always sad.
But everything begins again, too,
and that's always happy.

mervyn797

What? I'm right here. >D

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You are a master of on the spot poems, right? XD; How much time are you guys given to write?
I was a bit confused how the title was related to the poem as well...


Like a plane losing its control,
my love is crashing towards you.
I find these two lines remarkable the way you formed a connection! :>

Why does your gender say "Female" then?
Some people just do that for fun, or else it might be to earn the Gender Bender emblem. XD;

Zeffy

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You are a master of on the spot poems, right? XD; How much time are you guys given to write?
I was a bit confused how the title was related to the poem as well...
We write poems in the duration of 15-20 minutes. Hard to do..:(
they see me trollin'~

Nice poem, Zeffers. There's this unexplainable awesomeness about it...but that could just be me being silly and romantic haha. It doesn't sound very rushed, though. :D
nah, its just you being silly and romantic
Thanks!

There's an emblem for something like that?
That's pretty odd.
Ehh, we do it for fun. xD;