Fateful Love

Started by Midnight Moon~ October 20th, 2010 9:37 AM
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Posted December 25th, 2010
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I really love poems, I find them so...soothing, and beautiful. Here's another one that I wrote. I'd love any suggestions that anyone has that could make my writing better.

Fateful Love

We talk, we laugh, we get along great;
Us being together? It's known simply as fate.
But as all lovers know, it's love's curse to pass;
We can pray, we can fight, for our love to last.

Your the air that I breathe;
Yours is the beauty I see.
Thoughts of you are the thoughts which I think;
Yours is the water of life that I drink.

Life's empty promises mean little to me;
Except being with you, that's my destiny.
I don't fear death, it's hard but it's true;
The only thing I fear - living life without you.