Wishes, are they real?

Started by Zeffy October 21st, 2010 1:21 AM
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Zeffy

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Posted January 30th, 2021
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Wishes, are they real?

I wished one night,
Upon a star so bright.
I thought it would come true,
And so I waited in your woo.

Wishes, are they real?
They don't seem much of a big deal.
And so I end this poem,
with a wish upon another star.
Just to figure things out,
I wish I could fall in love.

Meh, I made it on the spot (not right now) to practice for my poetry exam in English this coming Saturday.

Thoughts? Criticisms? Violent reactions?
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Seen January 4th, 2013
Posted December 25th, 2010
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*has a violent reaction* x3 Just kidding. I love it, it has this really simple, catchy flow to it, much like (as the previous poster said) a disney song. I was kind of thrown with the "woo" part, expecting more of a "waiting on you" thing, but after re-reading it, I understood what you meant(:
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