Anxiety is a large example theme in poetry.
And you really show that.
Well done!
Thank you. :3
This sentence should be either, "I stare into the white-faced mirror." or "I stare at the white faced mirror." Also, I think mirrors are usually referred to as silver rather than white.
The word "into" I genuinely missed, thanks. XD
This mirror is supposed to be white for a reason, not silver. :]
The word "looks"; I don't think that it goes in well with looks. I understand that you are trying to say that the
'thunder' looks and shouts, but either way I don't think it fits in. Or try changing that word (thunder). :\
I...
think I understand what you're trying to say. Do you mean that it's impossible for thunder to physically 'look' at something, and therefore it doesn't fit? If so, I deliberately put the word 'thunder' in there, and in this poem yes, thunder has a face and it can look. This poem wasn't intended for anyone to really understand what it means, unless you know me or you're someone who has been through the same thing I am. I had written it to get it off my mind and distract me last night.
Overall, I think this is a nice piece of poetry with a pretty well formation of words. I'll be looking forward to an even better piece of poetry the next time. :)
Thanks, except I'm not really a poet and this is one of the rare times I write poetry. I will try to make my next one better though, bwahaha. :p
Again, thank you for the comments. :]