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Old December 13th, 2010 (5:24 AM). Edited December 13th, 2010 by Shadow_Darkraikou.
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    So liek I wanna be a Graffic Arteest
    So liek, I can do scratches, Fusions, ecolours, and all that jazz. :<

    Seeing as you need to post 15 times to post URLS and such, you can view everything on this:
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    Old December 13th, 2010 (7:40 AM).
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      How about making it where you have multiple menu options? Like B/W English, Japanese, HG/SS English, Japanese, etc. Just an idea~
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      Old December 13th, 2010 (11:15 AM).
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        I want to be a graphic artist. Yeah I don't think I'll be good enough but i might as well try.
        I could also be a kinda new mod as I'm on nearly all the time and most of the times I'm on I see spammer's in the Cbox and no Mod's are online.
        So yeah...

        http:/./s906.photobucket.com/home/SophieTheSpriter/index
        Take ^ that dot out

        Erm there's another one there with animations

        Criticise all you want I won't get offended
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        Old December 13th, 2010 (2:02 PM).
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          He's telling the truth, you are all newbies, as you guys are new to this forum.
          I have had an account on here forever I just had to make a new account(Ya I know it sucks and I hate doing it again)
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          Old December 13th, 2010 (3:26 PM).
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            cless i can help with maps, since i can easily get some good tools, i think i'm a more talented mapper than a spriter, as for fusions, give me a few pokemon/trainers to fuse and we'll see how it works out.
            Examples?

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            Hmm, I can do the others, but not that good, please look:
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            Mewtwo + Lucario (old work)
            Minun + Plusle
            Dugduo (bad shading, I know)
            Unown X + Unown O (= Arceus ring)
            Pokeballs (old work)
            Arceus ring for favicon

            Non Pokemon:
            Sonic the Hedgehog + Shadow the Hedgehog + Silver the Hedgehog (I was once a Sonic fans)
            I think I'm going to need some more examples, preferably more recent things. A more complicated fusion perhaps? What you have up so far are fairly simple so I can't really judge your experience with that.

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            Who is this Neku person Julie? =P
            I believe that would have been me. Cless just fails at spelling. xD J/K (That would be me though... otherwise I'll have to hunt someone down for sprite theft...)

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            So liek I wanna be a Graffic Arteest
            So liek, I can do scratches, Fusions, ecolours, and all that jazz. :<

            Seeing as you need to post 15 times to post URLS and such, you can view everything on this:
            (Remove Spaces)

            -link-


            -- SDR
            I'm taking a break from Spriting untill my Laptop is set up.
            Time for some crit. I'm gonna try to get straight to the point rather than go on a long rant on what is wrong, etc.

            Spoiler:
            - It seems that a lot of your more recent uploads are photoshopped sprites. I don't really consider photoshopping sprites as a form of spriting. And what spriting I do see does have photoshop with it in many cases, but I'll focus on the spriting part.

            - The shades need more contrast in some cases, namely the sprites with all those yellow dots.

            - The yellow dots need better placing. It's almost painful to look at.

            - Looking at a scratch attempt, your outline work isn't horrible, but could use a lot of improvement. The shading could also use a LOT of work. As well as color/shade selection. (Looking at Flower-thing...)

            - The Dark/Light rule was broken in a Giratina Recolor I see. The shade selection has the 'neon' effect, which in some cases does look good, but normally should be avoid.

            - The Neon effect actually seems consistent through some of your recolors. The Neon effect isn't a good idea for scratches and more serious sprites. Try making more 'natural' recolors.

            - When adding any type of markings to a sprite, keep in mind the shape/curves/etc. of the Pokemon.

            - In your fusions, you lack any sort of reshading on and around the fused parts.


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            I want to be a graphic artist. Yeah I don't think I'll be good enough but i might as well try.
            I could also be a kinda new mod as I'm on nearly all the time and most of the times I'm on I see spammer's in the Cbox and no Mod's are online.
            So yeah...

            -link-
            Take ^ that dot out

            Erm there's another one there with animations

            Criticise all you want I won't get offended
            Spoiler:
            So, first thing...

            - Your palletes. The neon look is consistent all the way through. Basically, you need a lot of work on your shade selection. (Which is extremely important in scratches).

            - There is no reshading in your fusions, and they don't flow very well.

            - Your scratch thing... well, I'm not going to lie. Is horrible. Shading, colors/shade selection, outline is pretty messy, and it breaks the size limit.


            Well then, that is it for now, hrm? I'll check by later tonight.
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            Old December 13th, 2010 (4:30 PM).
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              Ooh, I can't wait for the new version. Well, I'm sure everyone can't wait.
              I don't feel that I'm good enough to fill any position, though I may try for the graphic artist if it's not taken by the time I get some updated examples of my work.

              Anyway, I wish good luck to all that are applying!
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              Old December 13th, 2010 (6:32 PM).
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                I want to be a graphic artist. Though I do suck.
                Here is one example

                http:/,/i732.photobucket.com/albums/ww327/Baobao1998/Tpm.png
                Get rid of Comma
                If you say it sucks I will go home crying and..................
                Ok no I wouldn't do that since I want to get better.
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                Old December 13th, 2010 (9:13 PM).
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                  Miken - Examples of art/sprites would always be helpful.

                  Baobao - Uh... recolors on Plusle/Minun aren't exactly the best. The Pikachu is missing a large chunk of it's outline. The map isn't too bad, but can still use some work.
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                  Old December 13th, 2010 (10:27 PM).
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                    Ah, I already delete my other works, sorry
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                    Old December 13th, 2010 (10:30 PM).
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                      Ah, I already delete my other works, sorry
                      Then make more. Working for TPM is more than just a few sprites. I have to do at least 1298 Crystal Sprites (not counting fakemon). Crystal sprites take anywhere from 10 minutes to an hour and a half. If you aren't willing to put some sort of commitment into your job, I wouldn't suggest applying. This job is more than just a fancy title, as I'm sure you are aware.
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                      Old December 14th, 2010 (3:34 AM).
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                        Then make more. Working for TPM is more than just a few sprites. I have to do at least 1298 Crystal Sprites (not counting fakemon). Crystal sprites take anywhere from 10 minutes to an hour and a half. If you aren't willing to put some sort of commitment into your job, I wouldn't suggest applying. This job is more than just a fancy title, as I'm sure you are aware.
                        May You teach me how to make crystal sprite? maybe I can help You
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                        Old December 14th, 2010 (6:05 AM). Edited December 14th, 2010 by baobao98.
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                          Miken - Examples of art/sprites would always be helpful.

                          Baobao - Uh... recolors on Plusle/Minun aren't exactly the best. The Pikachu is missing a large chunk of it's outline. The map isn't too bad, but can still use some work.
                          The Pikachu outline was due to the plusle and minum fakes. So what do I need to work on the map?

                          Also since we are doing the emerald game tile thing I tried to make a trainer battle sprite from the back. I made three just in different colors. Also I am trying to get the head to fit so right now he has no head

                          http:/,/i732.photobucket.com/albums/ww327/Baobao1998/Tpm2.png
                          No comma
                          Plus I just recolored from the male backround in Black and White
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                          Old December 14th, 2010 (10:59 AM).
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                            May You teach me how to make crystal sprite? maybe I can help You
                            Uh, no thanks. I'm going to do those alone. I'm rather picky about other people using my palletes. I'd only allow people I KNOW can use the pallete as well as I can, if not better. It's one of my most difficult palletes to pull off due to the shading and transperancy.

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                            The Pikachu outline was due to the plusle and minum fakes. So what do I need to work on the map?

                            Also since we are doing the emerald game tile thing I tried to make a trainer battle sprite from the back. I made three just in different colors. Also I am trying to get the head to fit so right now he has no head
                            The map is a bit rough and doesn't flow properly. It could also use more detail.
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                            Old December 14th, 2010 (11:26 AM). Edited December 14th, 2010 by baobao98.
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                              The only problem is that Cless didn't tell much about Apholite. For example he didn't tell what that ??? thing was so I had just put a route on there. If Cless could tell me more about it I might be able to fix it a little
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                              Old December 14th, 2010 (11:37 AM).
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                                ...I'm just gonna quit Spriting all in all.
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                                Old December 14th, 2010 (11:40 AM).
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                                  ...I'm just gonna quit Spriting all in all.
                                  That was quick then, only one day of spriting? Can't kick yourself that hard if you don't try further.
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                                  Old December 14th, 2010 (12:03 PM).
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                                    That was quick then, only one day of spriting? Can't kick yourself that hard if you don't try further.
                                    Dude.
                                    One day?
                                    I've been spriting for years.
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                                    Old December 14th, 2010 (12:31 PM). Edited December 14th, 2010 by Miken13.
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                                      ...I'm just gonna quit Spriting all in all.
                                      Aw, don't quit on it now! It just takes practice is all.
                                      Constructive criticism on your sprites helps too, as people will kindly point out what needs work and what they like about it as well.
                                      You'll get better if you keep at it!

                                      Oh, and I will get a few sprites up at least so I may have a chance at the spot.
                                      You don't use MS Paint to do the Crystal sprites, do you, Neko? They look a bit complex.
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                                      Old December 14th, 2010 (12:37 PM).
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                                        Aw, don't quit on it now! It just takes practice is all.
                                        Constructive criticism on your sprites helps too, as people will kindly point out what needs work and what they like about your work.
                                        You'll get better if you keep at it!

                                        Oh, and I will get a few sprites up at least so I may have a chance at the spot.
                                        You don't use MS Paint to do the Crystal sprites, do you, Neko? They look a bit complex.
                                        Neko did say she would drive out anybody she saw unfit to be one
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                                        Old December 14th, 2010 (12:39 PM).
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                                          Well,I don't think that means that someone would should just quit spriting all together if they weren't accepted for the position...
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                                          Old December 14th, 2010 (12:42 PM). Edited December 14th, 2010 by [Jc].
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                                            Im a graphic designer
                                            i can do everything u need
                                            not only sprites or layouts maps custom sprites all kinds of sprites
                                            Can make a whole website out of scratch (Design).
                                            but i can make everything that has to do with graphic designing i can work on anything starting from pics editing "photoshop" till
                                            3d rendering and modeling "3DS MAX" i can code but im not pro at it
                                            i know css,php,html
                                            i know a lil bit of flash (really a little bit)
                                            so thats quite all if i learn something new il message u and btw i have all the pokemon black and white sprites u need . I dont need nothing in return i just need to fill up my free time and mainly work on something cool and make it a challenge.
                                            Thanks

                                            Tell me anykind of examples u need and il post it
                                            even if it is a 3d model of a pokemon !

                                            Plz reply thnx

                                            [Jc]

                                            Quote:
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                                            Aw, don't quit on it now! It just takes practice is all.
                                            Constructive criticism on your sprites helps too, as people will kindly point out what needs work and what they like about it as well.
                                            You'll get better if you keep at it!

                                            Oh, and I will get a few sprites up at least so I may have a chance at the spot.
                                            You don't use MS Paint to do the Crystal sprites, do you, Neko? They look a bit complex.
                                            Crystal or any other type coloring is so easy
                                            You just get the palette and work on it lol i'll make u any sprite in under 1min..
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                                            Old December 14th, 2010 (12:56 PM).
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                                              why is there a limit to the beta testers please i have been on this game since 15 feb 2009 and i have nothing to do on tpm anymore
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                                              Old December 14th, 2010 (1:18 PM).
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                                                Dude.
                                                One day?
                                                I've been spriting for years.
                                                What for the team then cause unfortunately I never said in yourself lmao. Said in spriting meaning for the game :p.

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                                                why is there a limit to the beta testers please i have been on this game since 15 feb 2009 and i have nothing to do on tpm anymore
                                                Maybe cause the owner wants a limit...
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                                                Old December 14th, 2010 (1:24 PM).
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                                                  Im a graphic designer
                                                  i can do everything u need
                                                  not only sprites or layouts maps custom sprites all kinds of sprites
                                                  Can make a whole website out of scratch (Design).
                                                  but i can make everything that has to do with graphic designing i can work on anything starting from pics editing "photoshop" till
                                                  3d rendering and modeling "3DS MAX" i can code but im not pro at it
                                                  i know css,php,html
                                                  i know a lil bit of flash (really a little bit)
                                                  so thats quite all if i learn something new il message u and btw i have all the pokemon black and white sprites u need . I dont need nothing in return i just need to fill up my free time and mainly work on something cool and make it a challenge.
                                                  Thanks

                                                  Tell me anykind of examples u need and il post it
                                                  even if it is a 3d model of a pokemon !

                                                  Plz reply thnx

                                                  [Jc]


                                                  Crystal or any other type coloring is so easy
                                                  You just get the palette and work on it lol i'll make u any sprite in under 1min..
                                                  Do one of Crystal Kyogre!
                                                  The one I made looks stupid
                                                  I tried to copy from Neko's Groudon
                                                  http:/,/i732.photobucket.com/albums/ww327/Baobao1998/Tpm3.png
                                                  No comma
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                                                  Old December 14th, 2010 (1:31 PM). Edited December 14th, 2010 by Shadow_Darkraikou.
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                                                    Well,I don't think that means that someone would should just quit spriting all together if they weren't accepted for the position...
                                                    It's not like you know why I'm quitting.
                                                    You aren't psychic.
                                                    I'm not quitting because of that.
                                                    I'm quitting because I want to.
                                                    I'm quitting because I can.
                                                    I'm quitting because it's getting boring.
                                                    I'm quitting because I just dislike it.
                                                    Me making Sprites is a waste of time.


                                                    :/

                                                    Originally Posted by Pikachu4444
                                                    why is there a limit to the beta testers please i have been on this game since 15 feb 2009 and i have nothing to do on tpm anymore

                                                    Because I've been on 2.0 one day before you <3
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