TJgamer's Activity

Started by Zeffy December 23rd, 2010 2:30 AM
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Zeffy

g'day

Male
Seen December 1st, 2022
Posted January 30th, 2021
6,395 posts
14.1 Years
This is a poem I made to the person I see here almost every other day.

TJgamer's Activity

This person right here,
His name is TJgamer, dear,
He's the one to be blamed,
For keeping this section sane.

That man right here, you see,
Makes this section so full of glee,
That everytime I visit,
I see his name very explicit.

This place is different without him,
It becomes so dark and dim,
So our thanks we must offer,
So he will not leave any sooner.

Regeneration

meow

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Somewhere I Belong
Seen December 15th, 2016
Posted July 23rd, 2016
1,421 posts
12.5 Years
Oh my! How nice of you, Zeffy! I'm sure TJgamer shall be pleased with you. I think you should name this poem, "An ode to TJgamer" instead. XD

'Nuff of praise. Back to critique~! :(
In keeping this section sane.
Grammatically going, this should be "For keeping this section sane."

Its so dark and very dim,
I don't think the word "very" goes in well. I don't really know how to put it, but it doesn't sound well.

Overall, I like it. :D
I hope TJgamer is not going to leave us, your last line of the poem made me feel so. ;_;


Age 29
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Seen October 13th, 2021
Posted February 2nd, 2017
1,093 posts
13.8 Years
...I...am....speechless!
Zeffy, Regeneration, and all my other friends. Thank you so much!!
I know I have spent a lot of time here in the poetry section, but....wow!
I never had any intentions to leave, but after this, I now promise you, I will stay as long as I can.

I, again, thank you all very much!

The art of poetry,
Shall never die,
Words, rhythm, feelings,
Go give it a try.