It has a very mysterious and ominous tone it. Towards the middle I felt like the speaker felt empowered, yet cocky, and at the end they lose it all.
And I'll have to disagree with you when you there's no theme; all poetry has a theme. I thought the theme of this could be change or even loss, but their certainly is a theme.
Very well done, though. I'm usually really nitpicky when it comes to poetry and prose, but I really liked this
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