the only problem I have is with the second stanza. You have an abab scheme the whole poem, but in the second stanza the second and forth line don't rhyme.
I can't believe I missed that, well, writing in the early hours of the morning will cause stuff like that to happen. Thanks a lot for pointing it out, I've changed:
Look into my painted eyes,
See yourself staring back,
Hear the truth behind the lies,
Find another thing to say,
to
Look into my painted eyes,
See yourself deep within,
Hear the truth behind the lies,
Find another speech to spin,
It's not perfect, but I think its an improvement, thanks a lot to both of you for your feedback.