Ah, the old poems are still just as great as I remember them!
And your new poem. It's not perfect, but for being your first Pokémon poem, it's a fresh start.
I think I would have enjoyed it a bit more if I could recognize more of the Pokémon names. For I only know a few of the Unova region names.
I'm wanting to wait until Pokémon Black & White is released in North America.
In closing, great to see you write more!