ok this is my peom thread for just regular peoms
if you comment please can you say what theme you think it is!
ok here is 'the torned world' my first ever peom that i made!
Sun sets,
For a bet,
Stars appear,
From the rear,
The Moon glows,
As the night grows,
Humans stand,
Across their land,
In the breeze,
The humans freeze,
There something stares,
At a million glares,
Body cold,
Hair shines like gold,
Striped red,
Eyes as dull as lead,
It is weak,
As it leaks,
Across it face,
At its own pace,
Something was strange,
As their stares exchange,
It wasn’t insane,
It was in pain,
As time pass,
The stares didn’t last,
A boy that was told,
He would become cold,
Picked a random stone,
And thrown it alone,
Followed by mankind,
What was going though their mind?
It suffering became big,
Just by a kid,
The humans kept going,
They started towing,
It struggled to become free,
Yet it had no key,
Years passed by,
The question is why?
It makes no sound,
As it lay on its mound,
Yet it doesn’t leak,
As it takes a peak,
At the night sky,
With a sigh,
It eyes glisten,
As no one will listen,
A man comes near it,
Near it he sits,
His eyes were clear,
All but a tear,
He was sad,
Yet bad,
He looked in its eyes,
With a heart full of lies,
He held something man-made,
It turned afraid,
He brought up his gun,
It wanted to run,
But has nowhere to go,
Just like years ago,
Now here because of a boy,
Who wanted a toy,
“I’m so sorry” Said the man,
He had a slight tan,
It struggled to its feet,
The man got of his seat,
At the guns mouth,
It looks towards south,
Straight at the weapon,
With its heart weaken,
His heart weighted a pound,
As there was no sound,
It did not weep,
Its life was not to keep,
It was in fright,
But it was alright,
It cannot cope,
As it has no hope,
He cried with sadness,
“This is madness”,
He threw down his gun,
And said “run”,
He knelt to the floor,
Pointing towards the door,
“Go and be free”,
“Don’t worry about me”,
He opened the door,
There was a moor,
Its heart torn,
As it saw the lawn,
With its eyes still keen,
It ran out across the green,
Its eyes full of hope,
It couldn’t care less if it can cope,
When it arrived at its land,
Its hair was to the colour of sand,
Its eyes no longer lit up,
And became as big as a pup,
There was its house,
Now no bigger than a mouse,
And a grown boy,
Who never got his toy,
What you will hear next,
Should only be in text,
As it will hurt,
You will be alert,
You may need tissues,
Especially if you have issues,
Just using a tool,
Humans can be cruel,
The grown boy used a knife,
And took its life,
This scaring you is a might,
Over it’s both eyes from left to right,
Lay two scars,
As the grown boy left by car,
And gave a mighty laugh,
Leaving it on the path,
What you don’t realise,
Is that life is not a prize,
A mist covers human eyes,
And the human heart dies,
The human mouth lies,
Without any tries,
The minute humans were born,
Was the time the world got torn,
It meant no harm,
It was no longer calm,
Its mind could not stop,
Blood went drop by drop,
When mankind was the cause,
As its mouth was on pause,
Its eyes cry,
As it must lie,
You though it was a beast,
It wasn’t that at the least,
Its hair was striped by blood,
It wouldn’t wash it out if it could,
Its eyes had no colour,
By its life and others,
Its life worsen,
As it was loved by no person,
In fact it is a human,
Itself and other thought ‘inhuman’,
As it eyes see the truth,
But did not have any proof,
It bled from its heart,
Hit by god’s dart,
Live a life of lies,
And suffer when it dies.
edit: i realized it is pretty long :( sorry