Like A Phoenix

Started by Kelsey December 6th, 2004 7:36 PM
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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This is a poem both created and inspired by my dearest love...Matt. ^_^

Like A Phoenix

Matt~
I can't lie and say that I don't miss you,
I was tormented day in and day out.
Remember when I said "let it die"?,
Like a phoenix, it always comes back, Kelsey...all the time...

Kelsey~
And as the phoenix, our love grows ever stronger,
As the moons pass and the sun reaches its peak.
Our love shall outlast all time,
And endure all obstacles that we shall face.
Together, our love shall bind us, and rid us from a world of hate.
I love you...my phoenix in the sky so pure...


~Kelsey
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(. (.` ♥ Kelsey

Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~

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That was a really good poem, you really expressed your feelings, through the words and by use of the term "Phoenix". I could see it being in some sort of duet for a song ^^.
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That's so cute! Well, not cute, but... it's hard to find the word to describe it. I agree, you should write it as a duet song.


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Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
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"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
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I can tell you really like him. (I think I'm starting to get a crush on Reese o_O)


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
Bertrand Russell

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^_^ I hate to say it, but I am a hopeless romantic. XD So I must express my love for Matt otherwise I would explode. XD And you are paired to Alex, so why wouldn't you have a crush on him, Jedi? X3

~Kelsey
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(. (.` ♥ Kelsey

Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~
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Because I never had a crush on any of my pairs...


"One reason why mathematics enjoys special esteem, above all other sciences, is that its laws are absolutely certain and indisputable, while those of other sciences are to some extent debatable and in constant danger of being overthrown by newly discovered facts."
Albert Einstein

"What science can there be more noble, more excellent, more useful for men, more admirably high and demonstrative than mathematics."
Benjamin Franklin

"Mathematics, rightly viewed, possesses not only truth, but supreme beauty – a beauty cold and austere, like that of sculpture, without appeal to any part of our weaker nature, without the gorgeous trappings of paintings or music, yet sublimely pure and capable of a stern perfection such as only the greatest art can show."
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[blinks; astounded] Wow. That poem has much empathy in it. A lot of thought-spent and brilliant wording. Beautiful.
You have a true weaving with words, Kelsey.

Ever considered becoming a poet or writer? (well, already it seems obvious, so there wasn't much point in me asking. Ah well...)
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That was a really good poem, you really expressed your feelings, through the words and by use of the term "Phoenix". I could see it being in some sort of duet for a song ^^.
oh - oh - the perfect expression - I so agree! *imagines their voices in harmony*

you'd make such a great duo for songwriting... *sigh in rapture* that was amazing...
PON PON WAY WAY WAY

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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwws, thanks DP! You are all so kind. I can only hope to improve on my poetry. With all of your suggestions and encouragement, I am sure I'll reach that goal. ^______^

~Kelsey
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(. (.` ♥ Kelsey

Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~