Lacangel's
.hack//sign The Word R:X2 / RIDA is
declined.
Plot wise, it's fine! But you don't have a rules section or a rating. I'd also suggest restructuring the paragraphs and sections so it's a lot easier to read.
nidoking76's
Never Split the Party is
declined.
High fantasy is not something we get around here a lot, so that's good! I would ask that you maybe elaborate more on where the characters are and the world around them, so those making characters have information they can base their characters around.
darknite's
The Ruinous Games is
accepted!
Drazieth's
A Brand New Journey is
declined.
Please read the rules before submitting a roleplay. For one to be accepted, you need a decent plot, a sign up template, rules and a rating. When you say 'there is no plot', players have no direction or sense of motivation. Please adjust your plot so there is at least some overarching plot.