Check to see if your roleplay has been accepted! v.2 Page 2

Started by moon March 12th, 2011 2:39 AM
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Whoa! I leave the place for a weekend and you guys are as creative as ever! :D <3


Cookiez's RP thread is denied for now; the plot might work, but the background is a bit too vague to make sense. Why does the professor as you to "take a pokémon and go on a journey"? If she knew there was something dangerous out there, why does she send you out on the journey?

Plus, if some players choose the free mode and some choose the chapter mode, how will they go about interacting? I'd like to see some more explanations or guidelines on this :3

The Trotsky's RP thread is accepted.

Sir Snivy's RP thread is denied for now. The guidelines and sign up sheets look good, but the plot is just a tiny paragraph. You should flesh out the plot, create a feeling around this tournament and the rising of the evil team so that the players get a feeling for what kind of world they'll be throwing themselves into, don't you think? :) Plus, the gym leaders and different trainers/team members might want to know where they are or at least what situation they are in when the game starts.

pikakip's RP thread is accepted, just remember to press the "space" button a few more times between words, xD

Fire Walker's OOC thread is now accepted.

mzmingle's OOC thread is accepted. (Gym Leaders Adventure)

Blaziken15's OOC thread is accepted.

pikakip's OOC thread is accepted.

mzmingle's other thread is denied for now. The plot is too vague, as is the setting. Of course nobody knows much about Olysis if it's an unexplored region, but my guts tell me there should be more text in the plot before I should accept this RP. What does the sailor do in the region now? And are there gyms there when the region is unexplored...?
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Fearless Love's RP thread is accepted.
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Roserade's RP thread is denied. The plot is too short, you should explain the circumstances more.

Zerkrom The Hedgehog's RP thread is denied. There is far too little plot.
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King∞Nido's OOC thread is accepted.

Sir Snivy's RP thread is accepted.
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Roserade's RP thread is pending until you PM/VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is up.

Aura.Lucario's RP thread is pending until you work out a way to make it clear if the players will be pokémon living in a human city, or living in a pokémon city where pokémon are referred to as "people". PM/VM me with an explanation and I'll accept the thread if you promise to edit it accordingly later :)

Aura.Lucario's RP thread is now accepted.
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Aura.Lucario's OOC thread is accepted.

Supervegeta's OOC thread is accepted.

darkpokeball's RP thread is accepted.

Baconkillszombies' RP thread is accepted.

Roserade's RP thread is now accepted.
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Blaziken15's RP thread unfortunately is denied because there is too little plot. Think it through and flesh the plot out a bit. Why are you (as a player) sent out to defeat the bad guys? How will you go about doing it?

Blaziken15's RP is now accepted.
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FallenAngelSilver's RP thread is accepted. Looking good!

dajman1996's RP thread is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is up.
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dajman1996's RP thread is now accepted.

miley810
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Baconkillszombies
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Yuukihime's RP thread is accepted.

NamelessGuy's RP thread is accepted.

Fearless Love's RP thread is accepted.

Miley810's RP thread is accepted... though I think you could describe a bit more about the world it's set in. What are the cards and what do they do? Now only people who really know Cardcaptor Sakura can play. But maybe that was your intention.

miley810's OOC thread is accepted. (for another RP :3 )
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Fearless Love's OOC thread is accepted.

Blaziken15's OOC thread is accepted.
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miley810's OOC thread is accepted.

Namelessguy's OOC thread is accepted.
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MissDoronjo's RP thread is accepted.

Eeveemaster9's RP thread is accepted.

Aura Rift's RP thread is accepted.
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Konokodemon's RP is pending until you PM/VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the RP is up.

FallenDestiny's RP thread is denied because the plot is too short. From what I can see, this will most likely turn out as another one of those romantic, nuzzling RPs with 3-liners as the standard. No offense, but you should describe the gameplay a bit more closely.
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Konokodemon's RP thread is now accepted.
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Fallen Destiny's Rp thread is now accepted.
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FallenAngelSilver's RP thread is now accepted.
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FourCartridge's RP thread is accepted.

Varin
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Lilliana'
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Xilfer123
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jarchio's RP thread is denied. The plot and all is way too short. Please read the RP rules, found in a sticky thread on top of the RP Corner forum.

miley810's RP thread is denied. The plot is a bit loose and short, and you aren't really describing what the point of the RP will be.


FallenAngelSilver's RP is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the RP thread is up.

justmaee's thread is denied because... well, it's a cool idea, but we usually want more advanced things here and a chat thread isn't really fitting. You could try posting it over in the Pokémon Manga/Comics section of PokéCommunity though.
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obavijest's RP is accepted. Good luck!

Varin's OOC thread is accepted.
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SpectralRicanX's RP has been denied. There's basically no plot at all. Please describe what the players are supposed to do in the RP.

FourCartridge's OOC thread is accepted.

PartiallyInsaneWhimsicott's RP thread is accepted.
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ElectricScyther's RP thread is accepted.

PartiallyInsaneWhimsicott's OOC thread is accepted.

SpectralRicanX's RP is still denied. Once again, you have to put up some kind of background story and plot for the players to spin their adventures around. Look at the other RPs in the Roleplay Corner for examples.
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Sorry for taking several days since the last update, guys. I have a very busy life -.-


Fearless Love's RP thread is accepted.

FallenAngelSilver's RP thread is now accepted.

DeadAlex5's RP thread is unfortunately denied.
The plot is too short, please expand it.

Nintendoshs' RP thread is denied.
The plot is too short and doesn't describe enough. And think again about letting in 29 players... it can get pretty messy.

Roserade's RP thread is accepted.

Ash's Pikachu's RP thread is denied.
We've had several B&W roleplays lately, so now I think new ones should have something special in their story setting them apart. This doesn't, so try to come up with something a little different in terms of story, instead of just the journey the player makes in the game. Also, it's a good idea to describe a bit about how the RP is supposed to be played.

Xilfer123's RP is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is up.

miley810's Rp thread is unfortunately denied again, because I still don't understand completely.
Is the magical world the forest inside the city, or is there a gate of some kind where you can pass into the magical world? And are the kids (the players) going to become mages when they enter there?

jackblaze's RP thread is accepted.

Fluff's RP thread is accepted, because I'm nice and it looks neat.
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Fluff's OOC thread is accepted.

Cookiez' RP thread is denied for now.
It sounds interesting, but you should describe a little more about the world they're in and what the players are really supposed to expect from the RP. Is there a goal of some kind?

rlyn99's RP thread is approved.

R.K 9's OOC thread is approved.
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MichaelDj54's OOC thread is accepted.

Eeveemaster9's OOC thread is accepted.

miley810's RP thread is now accepted :)
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Miss Doronjo's OOC thread is accepted.

Diamond1304's OOC thread is accepted.
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