Moved this to the Poetry section for you.
At any rate I liked the poem, although I did feel that it was a bit too choppy by ending each line with a full stop - maybe consider changing a few to commas instead so it flows a bit better.
Seen endless tide dividing.
This line also struck me as a bit odd0sounding as I'm not really sure what you're trying to say with that line, although maybe I'm too tired to get it.