Bit O' Poetry

Started by theowlmanlives April 6th, 2011 4:40 AM
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Age 29
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Somewhere with internet access apparently.
Seen March 24th, 2012
Posted December 30th, 2011
49 posts
12.3 Years
(Bad as it may be I'm still posting it 'cause I want some constructive criticism.)
(Also, yes its acrostic)
Storms
Thunder clashes
Outside lightning strikes
Rain falls violently
Mothers quiet scared children

Here's another:

When Guardian of Black,
and Guardian of White,
meet each other there begins a fight,
and a gray horizon is formed.
And lo, the end of man is born.
Only one can stop this destruction.
One partnered with one imbued with lightning.
And there man's destiny is decided,
with a battle ending in a clash of lightning
.
I reject your reality and substitute my own
-Adam Savage
Age 29
Male
Somewhere with internet access apparently.
Seen March 24th, 2012
Posted December 30th, 2011
49 posts
12.3 Years
Though I doubt you'd remember TJgamer but I posted the second poem before at meerfall's pokemon poem thread.. at least I think it's meerfall's thread... It was my first shot at Poketry.
I reject your reality and substitute my own
-Adam Savage