Wow, its very ture what your saying, people should live their life and not take it for granted, because once your gone you reget what you missed out on.
I really did enjoy it, but it seems to be that a few lines could use a bit of work. Its just that there is a bit too much rhyming, and it seems that its being overdone. But still good nonetheless.
And if you are going to post 2 pieces of poetry, please put it in one thread insted of making separate ones, it just makes everything cluttered.
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