LifeCycle

Started by Phlemingo December 13th, 2004 12:41 AM
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Phlemingo

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Age 33
Singapore
Seen July 23rd, 2010
Posted August 25th, 2005
385 posts
18.9 Years
When we were young,
We ran about.
Playful beings
We jump. We shout.
We know not what
The world's about.
Worries we were without.

When we grew older,
Looking up at the sky.
We wonder.
"What could be so high?"
We learn. We teach.
We test. We check.
Curiosity. We had a knack.

When we grew up
No time to ponder.
Problems aplenty.
Rest far yonder.
Potential stumped.
Fascinations. Curbed.
Immediate factors; we were perturbed.

When we grow old
We fear no more.
For we're almost
At heaven's door.
We have so little
Precious time.
While time away
while wind chimes chime.
And regret how we
had no chance
Our knowledge we wanted to enhance.

The cycle of life imprisons us,
Things we'll never understand.
Our responsibliities oppress us,
And we are not who we are in the end.

Treasure your time on Earth. You have 1 life - live it.

[Evil Twin]: Nic A.K.A. Composer Of Requiems

Kyosuke

.·Simple Complexity

Age 34
Pickering, On
Seen August 8th, 2018
Posted May 17th, 2014
2,485 posts
19.7 Years
Wow, its very ture what your saying, people should live their life and not take it for granted, because once your gone you reget what you missed out on.

I really did enjoy it, but it seems to be that a few lines could use a bit of work. Its just that there is a bit too much rhyming, and it seems that its being overdone. But still good nonetheless.

And if you are going to post 2 pieces of poetry, please put it in one thread insted of making separate ones, it just makes everything cluttered.
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