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Old May 6th, 2011 (6:57 AM).
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    I don't get you what so ever. All you do is blank out everything negative people say and just see what you want to see. And that VS sprite is really shoddy and easy to do. It's just using a script everyone has access to...

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    Old May 6th, 2011 (7:05 AM).
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    You edited a vs screen with rainbow colors and did a cruddy edit of Blue from HGSS. Using Essentials DS, that's hardly an accomplishment.
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    Old May 6th, 2011 (9:50 AM).
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      Lolz for today alot of new PMs and Pokemon Black at the league with alot of visitors xD
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      Old May 6th, 2011 (10:52 AM).
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        Lolz for today alot of new PMs and Pokemon Black at the league with alot of visitors xD
        You just don't get it, do you?
        People give you constructive criticism, and you just sit there, and ignore it.

        So everyone, lets just ignore his thread. Who's with me?
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        Old May 6th, 2011 (11:33 AM).
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          You just don't get it, do you?
          People give you constructive criticism, and you just sit there, and ignore it.

          So everyone, lets just ignore his thread. Who's with me?
          Not like anyone will do it but we'll see.
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          Old May 13th, 2011 (9:56 PM).
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            The game will take Essentials DS 5's scripts to Essential DS 4's
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            Old May 14th, 2011 (3:03 AM).
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              i think he means, he's updating to the newer essentials ds.
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              Old May 14th, 2011 (4:27 PM).
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                I believe he is from somewhere in the middle east, check his youtube channel, he has a video favorite with an Arabic title and with Arabic subs.
                That would explain his bad grammar, he is probably using a translating software, or isn't that good with English.
                That would also explain why he is not answering to most posts in his thread.
                He also failed getting the name of his channel, he used "Tusutaja" instead of "Tsutarja" but that's off topic, well, in fact, all of this is off topic.
                I might be wrong, but that's a little logic thinking.
                I don't think he is in the middle east but he could be Arabic. He probably can speak Arabic as well. A translator would give a direct translation from another language so i doubt he's using one. And many native English speakers are bad with grammar.

                To try and stay on topic, i'll comment on the game although I dont have much to say.

                The story doesnt seem very intriguing but its more or less decent. But im curious as to why Leon needs to unleash mutant Pokemon to stall the military.
                In the main games, the evil organizations were known to most people but,for example, Team Galactic never did anything to bother the citizens so the police etc. never had to get involved. But this is your game, so Ueno's police force may not consist of lazy bums like Kanto's or Sinnohs but I feel that stalling the military is unnecessary unless the mutant Pokemon play at least a sufficient role in the plot or at least as something to do like a side story/quest or just to make the game longer.
                As for your screenshots, just looking at them make me not want to play this. You may have your own style of mapping or you might just be bad but your maps have A LOT of useless space. Try filling them up with things such as furniture in a house or plants, houses and people outside or just make the map smaller.
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                Old May 15th, 2011 (2:12 AM).
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                Okay, I deleted all the spammish posts and posts that made no sense whatsoever. Please don't go offtopic, this thread is about the game, not about the author nor about the thread itself.
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                Old May 17th, 2011 (12:51 AM).
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                  Now I am not at my computer so I stopped developing for 3 days, so I dont want a mod to close the thread
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                  Old May 17th, 2011 (1:03 AM).
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                    Your maps are really big and empty. Try to make smaller maps with better details.
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                      Your Room is WAY to big. I suggest you get better tiles, or improve your mapping.The tiles are ok, but you should use other peoples comments to improve your game.But, i wish you good luck with your game.
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                      Old May 18th, 2011 (10:58 PM). Edited May 19th, 2011 by TheMarkCrafter.
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                        Neo-Spriteman's deviantart account is posting examples of work to copy maps cause Neo-Spriteman is the Mapper and Eventer..


                        BACK TO DEVELOPING!! Actually i joked when i said 3 days!! It was 2 days. So, i will post a video for the Shiny Diamond opening due to Elaynii's introduction.
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                        Old May 20th, 2011 (4:46 AM).
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                          The Shiny Diamond's Opening

                          READ!
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                          There are things that you must follow..
                          1. NEVER post spaming. Even Godslayerify.
                          2. Don't post: Your Game Sucks, Failed hack, etc..
                          3. That game is posted by RMXP and it's NOT a hack..
                          4. I am not a good mapper, though
                          5. I deleted Glitch Scenes, so that why the music is cutted.
                          6. Please, Please, and Please!! LOW YOUR SOUND CAUSE IT MAY GIVE YOU EAR-RAPE!
                          7. I didn't add music.
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                          Old May 20th, 2011 (5:09 AM).
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                          I can't say what's worse, the mapping or the grammar.

                          For one, why does mom a have pokemon center counter tiles in the house? Rowan: Good choice, Care it well. does not make any sense whatsoever. You need to get a translator for you game alone...To make it english.
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                          Old May 20th, 2011 (5:44 AM).
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                            Well I can see a lot of things wrong with this game. The grammar...did you go to school? You must know by the age of FIVE that "I" when you're talking about yourself it's a captial? The maps are just...sorry, scabby. They are WAY to spacey. The VS sequence is scabby and probably rushed on Paint. You need to clean uip this game.
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                            Old May 20th, 2011 (7:10 AM).
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                              @gsorby Well, how about your game Pokemon: The Nightmare? You stole the BAG, FIGHT, RUN, and POKEMON from O.G. Duke (omega groudon)'s Project "Pokemon Raptor"
                              And i have a new sprite for Lucas, it's made by this guy Tell me if it's good.
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                              Old May 20th, 2011 (7:38 AM).
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                                Although GSorby and Omega Groudon's fight scenes look a little alike, they are not the same, which means he has not stolen them.

                                Lashing out at someone because they gave you bad criticism really isn't the way to go.
                                Before flailing at someone and criticising their game for being similar to another game, remember you are making a Pokemon fan game, so your game bears resemblance to many others, including the official games.

                                GSorby is right on many points, like the mapping etc, it needs work, but i'm sure you know that. They are too spacious, maps seem to feel more alive if you cram them full of stuff, but leave room for the player to explore.

                                One turnoff for people playing your game, is spelling and grammar. People generally turn the game off if there's consistent bad spelling/grammar, so that's another issue to address.

                                Although GSorby may not have gone about criticising your game the right way, and suggesting how to improve things, you should listen to him. Ultimately, you're making this game for the public to play, so let the public have their input.

                                I'm not getting at you, I just thought it needed to be said.
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                                  Well I can see a lot of things wrong with this game. The grammar...did you go to school? You must know by the age of FIVE that "I" when you're talking about yourself it's a captial? The maps are just...sorry, scabby. They are WAY to spacey. The VS sequence is scabby and probably rushed on Paint. You need to clean uip this game.
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                                  if you looked at the previous posts, you'd learn that snivy, is arabaic, so thats why his grammar sucks.
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                                  Old May 20th, 2011 (8:21 AM).
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                                    Although GSorby and Omega Groudon's fight scenes look a little alike, they are not the same, which means he has not stolen them.

                                    Lashing out at someone because they gave you bad criticism really isn't the way to go.
                                    Before flailing at someone and criticising their game for being similar to another game, remember you are making a Pokemon fan game, so your game bears resemblance to many others, including the official games.

                                    GSorby is right on many points, like the mapping etc, it needs work, but i'm sure you know that. They are too spacious, maps seem to feel more alive if you cram them full of stuff, but leave room for the player to explore.

                                    One turnoff for people playing your game, is spelling and grammar. People generally turn the game off if there's consistent bad spelling/grammar, so that's another issue to address.
                                    Although GSorby may not have gone about criticising your game the right way, and suggesting how to improve things, you should listen to him. Ultimately, you're making this game for the public to play, so let the public have their input.

                                    I'm not getting at you, I just thought it needed to be said.
                                    Shouldn't of bothered with the massive post lol as he wont be able to comprehend it unless someone is able to translate it for him. By the way Kingsnivy irony is shown when you mention about stolen things every-time.
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                                      Don't think his arabic, tho this is a improvement snivy.. CBF going criticism because your just going to back it down, but a improvement.
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                                        Don't think his arabic, tho this is a improvement snivy.. CBF going criticism because your just going to back it down, but a improvement.
                                        You have a wrong thing dude, you have posted
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                                          Ok, i give up here.
                                          You obviously just skipped past my last post which was trying to help, and decided to correct someone's grammar instead, getting some wrong yourself.

                                          I'm gonna give a last comment, then leave this thread. But you probably won't read or listen to it anyway.

                                          Scripts:

                                          Try and not leave everything as default. Otherwise your game will turn out like everyone else's using Venom12's mod in terms of looks. Try learning scripting yourself, and expanding the features.

                                          Mapping:

                                          This has been said before, your maps are too big and empty. A house inside doesn't need a 25 x 25 map, just the default size is fine with the edges cut off. Try and fill your maps with tiles, not just the bare minimum.

                                          You should try and listen to everyone who posts on this thread as they're trying to help. If you ignore them, well, they'll just get fed up and stop caring, like me :/
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                                            Ok, i give up here.
                                            You obviously just skipped past my last post which was trying to help, and decided to correct someone's grammar instead, getting some wrong yourself.

                                            I'm gonna give a last comment, then leave this thread. But you probably won't read or listen to it anyway.

                                            Scripts:

                                            Try and not leave everything as default. Otherwise your game will turn out like everyone else's using Venom12's mod in terms of looks. Try learning scripting yourself, and expanding the features.

                                            Mapping:

                                            This has been said before, your maps are too big and empty. A house inside doesn't need a 25 x 25 map, just the default size is fine with the edges cut off. Try and fill your maps with tiles, not just the bare minimum.

                                            You should try and listen to everyone who posts on this thread as they're trying to help. If you ignore them, well, they'll just get fed up and stop caring, like me :/
                                            Its all a learning process, and your taking it to fast .. maybe you should show more maturity before creating a game ay?
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                                              Sure, a learning process, i get that. But it just annoys me when people ignore their public and just bypass completely what they've said.

                                              Anyway, before this thread gets more out of hand/off topic. Good luck with your project KingSnivy, hope it all goes well.
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