Moudinho's Fakemon

Started by moudinho May 1st, 2011 10:38 PM
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moudinho

Moudinho Of All Trades

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Seen September 6th, 2013
Posted September 6th, 2013
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12.1 Years
Hello,im creating a new game,and i thought,well apart from normal fakemon,why not make those who are related(evolve to/from) existing pokemon?It would be cool.

Okay,first one is Toxinc, GHOST AND POISON TYPE.

second is Khan Jr.,NORMAL TYPE (BABY)

Minatorus,STEEL AND NORMAL type

Stanley,NORMAL TYPE (BABY)

And Last but not least,ARMORKY,STEEL TYPE (BABY)

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Posted October 8th, 2012
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12.6 Years
They need work but theyre still pretty good! i like the skarmory Pre-evo and Stantler Pre-evo most :) i would change the tauros Evo so as its not just a tauros with steel parts, thats more a mad then an evoloution :L
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Posted May 9th, 2011
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DO NOT EVER EVER EVER SAVE AS .jpeg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Otherwise, these seem like simple fusions, with bad scratch parts. The line work on the scratch parts is blocky when it should be smooth. Especially Khan Jr.'s feet and Stanley back. Straight lines= no no. I don't even have any criticism for Armorky because it's really, really bad and mangled.
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moudinho

Moudinho Of All Trades

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Seen September 6th, 2013
Posted September 6th, 2013
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12.1 Years
DO NOT EVER EVER EVER SAVE AS .jpeg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Otherwise, these seem like simple fusions, with bad scratch parts. The line work on the scratch parts is blocky when it should be smooth. Especially Khan Jr.'s feet and Stanley back. Straight lines= no no. I don't even have any criticism for Armorky because it's really, really bad and mangled.

Alright man,harsh comment,but constructive!I'll work on that.Thanks!
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Posted October 18th, 2011
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I'm very intrigued by these. Are you working on them anymore? I like what you have done with Khan Jr. (Dang it Bobby...), and I think that Toxinc is really interesting. The Tauros one looks more like a type change. The prevo of Armorky is kinda disappointing. Not trying to be mean, it just doesn't seem to flow as well as the others.
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moudinho

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Posted September 6th, 2013
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I'm very intrigued by these. Are you working on them anymore? I like what you have done with Khan Jr. (Dang it Bobby...), and I think that Toxinc is really interesting. The Tauros one looks more like a type change. The prevo of Armorky is kinda disappointing. Not trying to be mean, it just doesn't seem to flow as well as the others.

Yep!I still am.=D
I'm looking to edit Tauros to make it look more unique rather than just a tauros with small changes.Whats wrong with Armorky!haah!any way to improve it? =)

TheMysteryEgg

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Posted September 19th, 2011
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^I can still see that for the post-evolutions, you took the actually thing and added on to it. I want to see almost no resemblance of the pre-evolution. Second, Armorky looks like you just smashed together the Skarmony parts, it looks small.


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moudinho

Moudinho Of All Trades

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Posted September 6th, 2013
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12.1 Years
^I can still see that for the post-evolutions, you took the actually thing and added on to it. I want to see almost no resemblance of the pre-evolution. Second, Armorky looks like you just smashed together the Skarmony parts, it looks small.

Well,skarmory is supposed to be small!!haha.Anyways,im looking to change the evos' cause they look,well like youve said,the same as its pre evolutions.Yep!

moudinho

Moudinho Of All Trades

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Singapore
Seen September 6th, 2013
Posted September 6th, 2013
26 posts
12.1 Years
I have made edits to several of my fakemons,but i just dont know why the images wont appear when i try to post it,it just puts a blank space with an x at the top left hand corner.
Anyways,here it is
http://moudinho.deviantart.com/art/MY-FAKEMON-208763511

Toxinc looks so agressive! :O I could imagine that he could be got by trading a Muk equipped with a...... Poop Berry? XD

Stanley reminds me of Deerling, and Khan Jr. was obvious, but interesting.
This was done around 2 years before the new 5th gen came out!haha.I just revived it.
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Posted August 2nd, 2011
11 posts
13.4 Years
Okay, so I'm gonna post some harsh C+C now.
Toxinc- It's outlining is okay, and it has awkward shading. To me, all it looks like is a Muk with tacked on spikes and drapion eyes. Also, the ghost type seems to come out of nowhere.
Khan Jr.- The top half looks like it was enlarged from the original sprite, and the lower half has a thick outline and very stubby legs. It probably would've been better if had a different pose.
Minatorus- This looks like a really bad remake of Tauros, if it was a steel type. The outlining, shading, and colors need A LOT of work. It's also very cluttered. Also, why does it have a random shade of brown?
Stanley- This one gets my vote for most boring name, no offense. Other than that, it's okay. The legs are just Stantler's back legs cp'd, and the neck is WAY to straight. Smoothen it out. It's also very flat.
Armorky- This one is up there with Minatorus; It's cluttered and has a lot of shading issues. I probably should've said this before, but there should always be one light source, usually the top left.
Overall, I'd give them a D- to C- grade. Try working on them more, and you'll get better. ;)
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i really liked new poison ghost it is pretty cool
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