Sapphire's Quest

Started by Super Torchic December 16th, 2004 6:31 PM
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Super Torchic

HEY!!!WHO AT MY SOCKS!!!

Age 29
...gee...somewhere in the solar system...
Seen September 22nd, 2005
Posted July 15th, 2005
928 posts
18.9 Years
Sapphires quest

Authors note: This story is not based on Sapphire from the Manga. Note: Safire is Sapphires nickname and they are both pronounced the same.


Safire sat up gasping for breath after seeing the horrible things in her night mare

I am Sapphire I have no last name I dont have nightmares anymoreI live them. First let me fill you in with what has happened. Hoenn and all the other regions were all mostly destroyed by the three teams. You might ask if anyone is trying to help, to repeal them, to reject them. Well there is and I am a part of it. The leader is dead the team is scattered. I have to gather the remaining members and overthrow the three teams. Using my special gift telekinesis I located one member close by. I could tell she is looking for something. With no time to waste I ran off because its all up to us.

Emerald look beyond the horizon wondering what was there.

My life is different from everyone elses. My life is not normal my family is scattered between three different teams. I am the single one who is good, there is only one way to stop them one way to live, to survive this empty place that is to find Safire, my former teammate and best friend. My charm bracelet glow giving off a reddish light indicating that the fire element is near. Which mean Safire is here

This is just a preview of what is to come. ENJOY!!!
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Hi, I was once Fireflameryu, but I'm now Super Torchic^^;;; May you RIP FFR!

Oh screw this-_-; I'll Be FFR again on christmas...if I remeber><!!!!!

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Alana

I still love this world...

Age 31
Right here
Seen August 7th, 2013
Posted November 14th, 2008
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18.9 Years
This Fan Fic sounds like it's going to be really interesting. You've done an excellent job so far. Good grammar(couple commas needed though). Great hook. And a good preview. I can't wait to read the first chapter. Keep up the good work.

~Reopened~

Spoiler:
Thought you'd see something interesting here, didn't ya? :D


Finally Alyssa spoke again, her eyes locked on the ball in my hand. “That isn’t an ordinary Pokeball. We call it the Soul Ball. The Pokemon inside it is very special. It represents who and what you are at the very deepest level. It is essentially your soul in physical form.”

“My soul,” I whispered, awe struck. “So that’s what you meant by my ‘soul companion’.”
~Faye

Lily

◕ ‿‿ ◕ double rainbow.

Female
New Joisey
Seen February 26th, 2017
Posted June 26th, 2011
3,329 posts
18.7 Years
Title- er...a bit cliche, no?

First sentence is a run on sentence right there. In fact, throughout your little 'prologue' there are a LOT of run on sentences, all which are lacking a comma. o.O

Also...don't rush things in the 'prologue' or (preview). You gave so many information about this fic...all in which is like a summary/IDEA rather than the story itself..right?

However, credits to you for using Sapphire. Safire..interesting.

( ‿‿ ) PM me for a contract.

Super Torchic

HEY!!!WHO AT MY SOCKS!!!

Age 29
...gee...somewhere in the solar system...
Seen September 22nd, 2005
Posted July 15th, 2005
928 posts
18.9 Years
^_^;;; sorry for all the grammer mastikes...you see...ummm Laugage arts isn't exactly myy BEST subject so I tend to make alot of mastikes>_< oopsies!!!^_^;;;
Visit my website at:Chickamiru Fourms




thankys!!!

Hi, I was once Fireflameryu, but I'm now Super Torchic^^;;; May you RIP FFR!

Oh screw this-_-; I'll Be FFR again on christmas...if I remeber><!!!!!

I support Ebil Shipping:P