GFA's Pixel Place Page 16

Started by GFA December 26th, 2008 7:09 PM
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GFA

Mega Blastoise is my homeboy

Male
Seen September 7th, 2018
Posted August 29th, 2018
1,830 posts
14.9 Years
Thanks for the help guys, you're the best. In all seriousness though, I'm starting to like the way she looks. A case of Stockholm syndrome perhaps?

Anyway, I tried my hand (hah!) at a VS Sprite. This is my second attempt at anything like this, and my first serious one. I'm pretty pleased with myself.



Thoughts?

blackmoonflower

You won't like me if I'm angry

Age 31
Female
Burton, MI
Seen April 9th, 2014
Posted September 6th, 2013
271 posts
13.5 Years
It looks better, but it still looks kind of squashed. Like the sides are too wide for how tall the VS sprite is, if that makes sense. Maybe it's just me. Also, I think the outlining for his arm could use a little more contrast on the side closest to his face.


<dA <Pixel thread <Etsy
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Seen October 16th, 2021
Posted December 23rd, 2019
35 posts
10.7 Years
Nice work, but there are still couple issues:

His head really seems too large, like as large as his shoulders...

It's a bit pillowshaded: the shadow on his face tells the light come from left, while the shade on his sleeve is coming from top-right.

There is missing shadow on his t-shirt under his arm. The light is coming from left et his body is facing right, so all is t-shirt should be shaded. Same goes for the right part of the (blue) vest. I would say that it should be shaded from about under his right eye (our left eye OPV) until the t-shirt.
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