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Old January 11th, 2009 (11:54 AM).
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... You mean when she had more on the bottom? Because the newest one's O and A are the same...
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    I think the first one was better (O)
    They're the same <_<

    The top one has her Original (O) outfit, the bottom has the Advanced (A) one.

    Personally, I prefer the older one (not the oldest one, but the one before this), I didn't think the extra hair looked too big.
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    Old January 11th, 2009 (12:04 PM).
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    Neither did I, lets see what AR thinks before I change it back.

    Edit: I'd also like to say that this is my first thread to get to 2 pages, not to mention 3, so thank you all for the support!
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    OK AR, how's this?

    The 2nd spite might need some darker shades on the clothes, since the outlines stands out alot. (Black outline, right?)

    But, still, not bad I.M.O. ;]
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    Old January 11th, 2009 (12:29 PM).
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    Eh, I'm not really good outlines. What do you think I should do, use a dark yellow outline, or darken the inside colors?
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    Eh, I'm not really good outlines. What do you think I should do, use a dark yellow outline, or darken the inside colors?
    Hmm, maybe for the outlines you should use a dark yellow outlines. And for shades, a bit of a darker shade of yellow (inside, on the clothes).
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    Old January 11th, 2009 (12:34 PM).
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    not a huge change =/
    idk. might as well leave it.
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    Old January 11th, 2009 (12:42 PM).
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    OK, lets see what I can do... Using a dark yellow outline dosn't quite work I'm afraid, so how does this look?



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    Old January 11th, 2009 (1:02 PM).
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      Study the D/P overworld style a bit more to see that there are simplified colors and not much shading yet it looks stunning. Look at D/P's original Professor Oak and compare/study to improve.

      Im saying this because I am very experianced with sprite artwork, ESPECIALLY Pokemon styled sprites. If I have the time I will show you examples.
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      Old January 11th, 2009 (1:08 PM).
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      ... Was there a point in doing that besides to up your post count?

      Anywho, I made a Sprite of my Orange Archipelago RP character, Bon Choc, he's my first sprite, and still a heavy edit:

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      ... Was there a point in doing that besides to up your post count?

      Anywho, I made a Sprite of my Orange Archipelago RP character, Bon Choc, he's my first sprite, and still a heavy edit:

      The outlines are all black (or most of them are black). D=

      The hair could use some better shading, and on the jacket (i think it's a jacket) the Voltorb needs some shading, too. ;o But, it's a pretty creative edit to me. ;]
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      Old January 11th, 2009 (1:16 PM).
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      Thanks, as I have said before, I don't like outlines, but I see there importance, oh and it's a Poke Ball, not a Voltorb, but same idea
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      Old January 12th, 2009 (12:45 PM).
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        Personally, I prefer a colored outline to a black outline, gives the sprite a softer look. Most people don't like them (just like they don't like all black) as they like a mix of it. However, on humans, a mix is typically best :P On pokemon I prefer the all colored.

        Rough Showing on "softness" (Hope ya dont mind)

        And sorry, it is gonna be somewhat horrible, haha. I did it in like 4 minutes in paint <_< >_> Obviously these aren't the colors you'd be using for the outlines :P



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        Old January 12th, 2009 (2:39 PM).
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        I don't think its off topic, one is short and the other is long, me and my friend came up with it, and I don't mind you tried to show me what people meant. How's this?

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        you still need to get rid of alot of black outline.
        especially on the hair!

        the red for the pokeball on the shirt is to bright. choose a different shade of red.
        is that the default red on paint?
        like the ones that are first in your canvas? never use those.
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        you still need to get rid of alot of black outline.
        especially on the hair!

        the red for the pokeball on the shirt is to bright. choose a different shade of red.
        is that the default red on paint?
        like the ones that are first in your canvas? never use those.
        No, the red's are from the Male Campers sprite
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        Ok, well its still to bright.
        I would suggest choosing a more saturated red.

        EDIT: I just checked it, it is the default red.
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        Ok, well its still to bright.
        I would suggest choosing a more saturated red.

        EDIT: I just checked it, it is the default red.
        Crap, Lets see. Is this any better?



        Also, once I find a way to, can I post a hand drawn image here?
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          Hehe, isn't that the red I quickly replaced it for? XD

          And there's still way too much black outline in the shirt and hair.
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          Old January 13th, 2009 (12:18 PM).
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          Really the same color. Cool. How's this?



          And could some answer my question: Can I put a hand made drawing here too?
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          Really the same color. Cool. How's this?



          And could some answer my question: Can I put a hand made drawing here too?
          Hmm, it's better, and I like it, but the pokeball on the jacket still kinda bothers me (it looks kind of plain I.M.O)
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          Old January 13th, 2009 (7:17 PM).
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          COULD SOMEONE ANSWER MY QUESTION CAN I POST A HAND DRAWN PICTURE HERE TO???

          On a not mad note: Bon, redone, once again.

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          i would assume that its not pixel art, that you shoudlnt.
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          OH O, thanks. Actually Anastasia R answered my question already, but thanks anyway. So no critque of Bon?
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            Try using a really dark color that fits with the color it is near instead of black.

            And there's too much black outline on the boots XD
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