Some Pixel Art that I made.

Started by TheMarkCrafter July 6th, 2011 8:16 AM
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TheMarkCrafter

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Kalos
Seen January 14th, 2016
Posted December 30th, 2015
543 posts
12.3 Years
I made:
A broken frisbee LOL!
A Rounded Rectangle
Earth sample
Gulpin sample
Oshawott Sample
Pikachu sample
Extra:
Oshawott's shell.

Sprites at attachies.
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Nina

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Seen December 20th, 2020
Posted December 7th, 2020
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15.5 Years
Not really that good at all.. The shading is poor, the colors are ugly, and I bet you used the circle tool on paint didn't you?
^This is not constructive criticism in my eyes. Telling someone they aren't good at all achieves nothing. You've not told them WHAT makes the shading poor or the hues unappealing, nor how they can improve or fix their works. :/

To KingSnivy

What is it exactly that you are trying to create? I'm not really sure what these are so it's hard to direct you in some aspects.
One aspect I can comment on is the spheres, and how you've shaded them. You have divided them with a straight diagonal line. Unless these are actual coin-like shapes, the shade itself will bend with the object.

This is one a very quick example, but do you understand? Does the sphere on the right appear to have more mass? Shading will follow the shapes that the shadow is on.




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Seen February 28th, 2012
Posted January 10th, 2012
19 posts
11.8 Years
Well I guess I'll get to the point

1st sprite. It looks like a halo but you say its a Frisbee
2nd.you just colored in a rounded rectangle made with the tool on paint
3rd. the earth it is misshapen
4th.im sorry but unless you read the thread you could not tell its a gulpin
5th.your pikachu has light shading on left red circle but its dark on that side so it shouldnt be there
6th.no comment
shell looks nothing like a shell

you shade with a straight line through them try what lornami said
the shadows are wrong, from where the light seems to be coming from it should be going to the side and stretching not sitting directly under
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Seen September 4th, 2014
Posted September 4th, 2014
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17.3 Years
My favorite one will have to be the Earth sample because it resembles the Earth and it looks like what it is then the rest of them. For Oshawott, try and match the ears on the head together


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