Dumped...

Started by Midori Chi December 21st, 2004 6:31 PM
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Female
Texas
Seen October 27th, 2019
Posted September 8th, 2016
5,522 posts
18.8 Years
Here's a little song that one of my many friends and me made up...

Dumped

There was a day, where I saw you with a girl.
She wasn't me,she was someone else.
And then you walked,and you said to me we were lost.

I'm dumped. There's nothing I can do.
It's over me and you.
We're lost in fields of love...
I'm dumped.Yet I don't care.
I've just now walked the stair.
I don't believe it's true.

You walked away.
I made a little tear.
But now I 'm through.
And then I turn around
I come to times.
Where I just sit and think.
I'd like to say,
I'm now with someone new.

I'm dumped. There's nothing I can do.
It's over me and you.
We're lost in fields of love...
I'm dumped.Yet I don't care.
I've just now walked the stair.
I don't believe it's true.

....And we're through....
Age 34
Alone :(
Seen October 29th, 2006
Posted October 29th, 2006
2,790 posts
19 Years
I like it XD

Ironically enough Kelis- "Milkshake" was playing on my Media Player during this, wow i feel horrible now ^_____^

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Age 34
Pickering, On
Seen August 8th, 2018
Posted May 17th, 2014
2,485 posts
19.7 Years
That really is good, I can see someone like Avril Lavrene (sp?) singing a song like that, but at the same time it could pass as a decent poem great job ^^.
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A place
Seen July 12th, 2005
Posted June 6th, 2005
494 posts
18.4 Years
I really like it ^.^ I don't think I could see Avril singing this cause..well..I'm a little biased because I don't like avril (please don't flame me! X.x)..but it's a VERY VERY good song/poem ^.^



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