Writer's Lounge Need advice? Want to give advice? Come on in and share ideas with your fellow writers. Just remember, all fics go in the main forum.

Closed Thread
Thread Tools
Old July 14th, 2011 (9:20 AM).
Full Metal's Avatar
Full Metal Full Metal is offline
C(++) Developer.
  • Silver Tier
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: In my mind.
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Nature: Timid
Posts: 806
I've been told that I have lots of potential as a writer and author by some of my friends, teachers, and family. I think some of my pieces are great, while others are not so great. I notice that the things I write are somewhat like poetry, but they don't really follow the unspoken "rules" of poetry. I need someone who could [ and would ] help me get this down to a science, and an extension of my intuition.
Here are a few of my better pieces.
So...yeah. I think a mentor would really help me out a lot.
I'm a little stubborn ( like most people ), but I do listen well. I guess what I'm saying is, I won't be one of those annoyances that makes you want to beat a face-shaped dent into the wall closest to you. (:
Contact info is in my sig, as well as a link to my blog [ which has my writings, as well as updates to my personal life. So not ALL of it is "in need of improvement" ]

★ full metal.

I like to push it,
and push it,
until my luck is over.

Relevant Advertising!

Old July 14th, 2011 (9:50 AM).
Astinus's Avatar
Astinus Astinus is offline
Remember NovEnder
    Join Date: May 2006
    Location: Connecticut, USA
    Age: 31
    Gender: Male
    Posts: 10,063
    We do have a Beta Reader thread located at the top of this forum. It's one of the stickied threads. A beta reader is what you're looking for, so filling out a form there is where you should have posted. But I will warn you that we've reached a dry spell for betas, so you won't get results quickly.

    For now, just keep posting your poems and listening to the reviews that you'll get, and maybe at some point in the near-future, a beta reader will come along.

    Good luck!

    The prologue begins now! Before you start to run
    Reach out with your hand and grab your freedom
    An absolute protagonist, a perfect hero...
    Sadly, these are things I'll never become

    Closed Thread

    Quick Reply

    Join the conversation!

    Create an account to post a reply in this thread, participate in other discussions, and more!

    Create a PokéCommunity Account

    Sponsored Links
    Thread Tools

    Posting Rules
    You may not post new threads
    You may not post replies
    You may not post attachments
    You may not edit your posts

    BB code is On
    Smilies are On
    [IMG] code is On
    HTML code is Off

    Forum Jump

    All times are GMT -8. The time now is 11:53 AM.