Now I see the rain

Started by Midori Chi December 22nd, 2004 2:48 PM
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Texas
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Posted September 8th, 2016
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18.8 Years
Okay...here's another song that one of my many friends and me made up...

Now I see the rain

I see your face. It reminds me of all the times, the times...we've been together...Those times were wasted. Love just dissapeared...

Now I see the rain.
There is no sunshine.
I think of you often, but I don't care.
Just let the thunder come. And the lightning strike...
Cause now...I see...the rain...

I see the sky. It is no longer blue. I thought...the days were great till now..you're with another girl...I'm just some girl in your past...

Now I see the rain.
There is no sunshine.
I think of you often, but I don't care.
Just let the thunder come. And the lightning strike...
Cause now...I see...the rain...

Whenever I look down...I see fire...Whenever I look up...I see dirty clouds...

Now I see the rain.
There is no sunshine.
I think of you often, but I don't care.
Just let the thunder come. And the lightning strike...
Cause now...I see...........

Cause now I see the rain.
Cause now I see the rain.

Kyosuke

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Don't worry if you don't see anyone post, as long as you see the views on the thread going up, its not being ignored (so you didn't need to delete your post and repost to bump, mods can see deleted posts and what it said) ^^.


Graet "heart break" song, it combines poetry and song lyrics into one, something that pretty much all decent songs are composed of and you pulled it off nicely.
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Great job, Trappy. =3 Although, I find the third verse could of been longer. Other than that, its very good. I <3 the chorus! ^______^

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Posted September 8th, 2016
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Hey Riyuko...did you realize both our avatars are of...Sakura! ...Anyway...and..the third verse..I did that for a reason...you see, on most songs...you focus on the chorus and the 1st and 2nd versus...the 3rd verse of any song is SUPPOSED to be shorter..but still tell something about the chorus....