Correction in red:
They said the third time was the charm, but would they finally do it?
Since this is only the prologue, I don’t have much to say, but it’s definitely interesting. It grabs your attention and I want to see what happens next, so good work.
"After being saddled with two ten-year-old brats and being sent out on her long overdue Pokemon journey, she can’t help but wonder… is it worth it?"