Tranquility

Started by Kelsey December 23rd, 2004 11:49 AM
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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Here is yet again another one of my poems that disappeared off of the face of the earth. XD Well, I hope you enjoy this one. ^______^

Tranquility

I saw in the forest, a demon take flight,
Pounding its wings with all of its might.
The demon, it soared, just overhead,
Rather than running, I gazed instead.

I could hear its heart, steady and strong,
Helping it forth as its wings pulled it along.
The demon was old, yet he didn't know,
For the world is changing, to and fro.

As I gazed upon the beautiful sight,
Seeing this monster take its last flight.
I thought to myself, how could this be,
That this monster had come to me?

With one last plunge, the demon fell,
Diving into the very depths of Hell.
As I gazed upon this demon's flight,
I thought to myself, what a beautiful sight.

~Kelsey
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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Yes, it did. This was actually my first poem. ^____^ I took my time on it, perfecting every piece of it that I could. I think it's turned out rather well, if I may say so. ^_~ Thanks for reading it, EFL.

~Kelsey
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I liked it, when I read it I think of a legendary pokemon such as Lugia, flying majesticly in the air, and catching sight of its beauty, it was written nicely and has your style of writing all over it, as I always say "nicely done" XP.

This poetry disapearance seems sort of odd, I might have to look into it. But Kelsey, even though you're reviving old work, it would have been easier next time to make one thread for "lost work", it just makes everythng less cluttered ^^'.
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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Thanks LT. I'm glad you had enjoyed it. ^___^

And yes, I'm sorry. It truly would have been more responsible of me to just make one thread. My apologies for teh clutteryness. ^^;;

~Kelsey
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Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~