Some of My Drawings

Started by Watertownronin August 19th, 2011 2:39 PM
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Trent_Jayir

Who the hell do you think i am

Age 31
Female
Tepellin
Seen March 18th, 2012
Posted March 18th, 2012
208 posts
13.4 Years
Hi there,
First I wanted to say I like this, the use of colour and shading technique are both really well executed, plus I really like your lineart. I hope you upload more of your images.

I also hope you don't mind but there's a couple of things I think might help you out.
Even though the shading is well executed sometimes the light source seems confused, for example in the reference photo, her skirt appears to hang loosely, but the way you shaded it made it seem to stick out. In the photo the area around her eyes is much darker, too.

Anatomy wise it's quite good, but if you look at her arm furthest from the viewer, in the photo you can only really see her forearm not her upper arm, but in the drawing you show lots more of her upper arm, which makes her forearm look pretty stubby. the only other thing I can see is that her eye (closest to the viewer) is too far away from the other one, making her face seem a little off.
Other than that, great stuff! :')
Male
Seen September 8th, 2011
Posted September 7th, 2011
20 posts
13.1 Years
woah! I like the coloring techniques of this Pika lady!! :)
Upon pages and pages of entries
We've put down all our emotions
But now I've hit a writer's block
I don't know how to finish this page anymore
Putting a bookmark in my diary
You and I go out to ride the bike we found on a dumpster
Let's go to our secret place
Where we piled up on our bricks of memories
Run up the hill wheer we can see the horizon
Where we can see the sky so fearfully blue
With cider in my right hand
My other hand helps me search for you
You used to come find me way back then
You used to demand me of so much more
You're both still standing right by my side
Yet why do I pray to see you both again?
There must be something off with me