Voted for Derozio. Love the style, the color-- and the text. Always been one of my favorite looks, and while not exactly pulled off perfectly, it's not shabby by any means. Definitely colors feel a tad bit overdone, and wish there was a little more in the foreground though, feels a bit.... incomplete, I suppose?
I can't say I'm particularly fond of galukxy's, mostly because there's just too much smudging. Focal feels smothered by the colors, and it just feels like a slather of various colors instead of... a tag, I guess. Also not feeling that hard stuff going on at the bottom. Dunno what it is, but the texture totally clashes with whatever smudge setting was used.
Not sure how I feel about the contrasting angles on moments' entry. Feels like all the lines are shooting the direction and flow of the tag all over the place and the contrast in color between the text and the focal are totally distracting me. I'm just not sure where to look. *A*;;
Not much to say on Jalorda's, you need fewer sparkles/stars and more concentration especially since you have a perfect spiral point around which to burn or darken the edges of your tag to bring in the focal.