It all starts with imagination.

Started by mzmingle October 4th, 2011 11:04 AM
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Age 21
Female
Hoenn
Seen January 5th, 2023
Posted October 22nd, 2013
682 posts
13.1 Years
hi, welcome to my new poem and rap thread. It will mainly have poems, as it is in the poetry corner.

Poems

The Lunar Eclipse
The night is dark,
the sky is black,
but I can see something,
looks like its back.

Glowing softly,
red as copper,
I can see it clearly,
it looks improper.

Its beautiful,
the moon's not shining,
looking out,
the moon and sun are aligning.

The Night was dark,
the sky was black,
I saw something,
The lunar eclipse was back.

Raps

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MMn



darkpokeball

Beware the Chainsaw Meowth 0.o

In your nightmares
Seen April 10th, 2014
Posted November 17th, 2013
762 posts
13.3 Years
Cool poem. I think that though you have an awesome start in poetry, you can get better. On 'the moon and sun are aligning' it kind of feels a bit...too long for the rhythm. Other than that, awesome! Keep writing!
My Chainsaw Meowth is currently missing! If you have a lead or think you know something, PLEASE PM ME! I am desperately searching, and I dread the possibility that I may never find him...
On a side note, if anybody can answer the following question right, then they get a mystery prize! *Must have a Gen V game to claim prize*
Question: What the heck did Jinora do in the finale?! I don't get it! I know 90% of you won't know what I'm talking about, but I need an answer!