"OBJECTION!" Ace Attorney Fan Club Page 3

Started by Truality October 14th, 2011 4:53 PM
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Kura

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Or Impo could totally post it here (and hide some stuff under spoilers if it spoils for some games)~ That way we could all give suggestions. Or he can write it out in the fanfiction forum here.. and we could offer crit there..
That is, if he wants to~ :3 I was thinking of doing something with my AA fanfic once I finish up chapter 2 <3

SPREAD THE ACE ATTORNEY LOVE <3
~Yuugiou Fan~
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♡(´・ω・`)LOVE! ☆

Kura

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I've written Chapter One :D
(oh yeah, right now it is a story)
Have you posted it here yet? :3 Linky?

Also this made me laugh:

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~Kamen Rider Fan~
♡(´・ω・`)LOVE! ☆

alisaie

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I think I lack the creativity to think of a case, myself. :c I would certainly read yours when you have it up somewhere though, Impo.

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f i r e f l y .

Age 30
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Seen July 4th, 2020
Posted December 21st, 2019
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14.3 Years
TAKE THAT! The evidence I'm providing for my entrance into this club!

Even though I've only played Justice For All and Apollo Justice, I think the series is fun and I want to join. I remember one line from a testimony where the witness says "and it was oh my gawd, totally my sister!" I could really imagine that being said. xD

Impo

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TAKE THAT! The evidence I'm providing for my entrance into this club!

Even though I've only played Justice For All and Apollo Justice, I think the series is fun and I want to join. I remember one line from a testimony where the witness says "and it was oh my gawd, totally my sister!" I could really imagine that being said. xD
Ini Miney?

Anyways, here is my story so far, probably a mess of spelling and grammar errors, but oh well. It's copied straight from my fanfiction.net

Authors Note: Hey guys, I'm here with a fan fiction. I've long been engrossed by the delicacy of the cases in Ace Attorney, and wonder how hard it would be to create a case. Well, there is only one way to find out. I wrote this so it would fit in the timeline before Apollo Justice and Investigations started. Also, to truly enjoy this fiction, you need to suspend your disbelief regarding prior convictions. They still happened, it's just that the perpetrators may or may not be in jail.
Chapter One
Date and Time Unknown
Location Unknown

A mysterious figure sat in a darkened room, talking to a crowd of eleven silhouettes. Just behind him, a note board was just visible, currently blank. His voice was ice cold unlike his usual jolly facade, and he was playfully tugging a strand of his lightning-shaped hair.
"Greetings, everyone. We are all here today, united by something – hate. I have called you all here for a reason, and that is revenge. Revenge on the one who soiled our names and tainted us as low-class criminals. Together, we can slowly torment him and do so without anyone being the wiser. I don't think I need to ask this, but who is in?"
The speaker was met with enthusiastic response, but a small question arose.
"Youse knows I'd love me some revenge, but how's we exactly going about dis?"
"Well, I'm glad you asked. There are a number of us here, and we don't exactly just want to kill our target, do we? No, that wouldn't cause him much pain. Let's go deeper. Let's go deeper than cuts can wedge, than bullets can penetrate. Let's make every waking moment for him hell before we strike.
"Still, how's we do dat?"
"Isn't it obvious?" The figure laughed icily. "We get his friends – his clients. Those who believe they finished one step ahead of us, and believe that we will be left to rot. We start from here."
The figure turned to face the note board, and pinned up a diagram that he had been lolling in his hand for some time. There were circles of people, their details and appearance listed to a tee. In the centre of the diagram, circled in a thick red marker, was the mug shot of one Phoenix Wright.
"...Will youse move, I can't see what you put on da board!"
The silhouette shuddered and moved to steps to the left.
October 31st, 10:40pm
KB Security

Wendy Oldbag was patrolling the corridors of KB Security, talking on her cell phone. The corridors of her workplace had been dressed up for Halloween, with jack-o-lanterns at every corner and cobwebs hanging from the ceiling.
"Why did you make me buy this thing, Onchi, I don't see why I need it. You whippersnappers with your technology – when I was young I would talk for hours using a cup and sting – no need for this cellular nonsense, it's all too confusion. Sure, we'd get the stings struck and the reception wasn't as good but at least I retained my childish sense of adventure and creativity for as long as possible. Not now, I tell you. People with their technology thinking they're superior just for owning the latest phone - just this morning I was driving to work and some nincompoop on his phone cut me off! Lucky my phone-free hands were ready to grasp the wheel or we'd've both been dead. But I didn't let him get away without knowing-"
Wendy stopped rambling as she heard the distinctive sound of someone knocking over a lantern. Wendy froze. It sounded like it came from just around the corner. She was usually running head first to the source of the noise, but the current decor wasn't her cup of old fashion tea. To be honest, it scared the living daylights out of her - especially since she was taking the night shift.
"Wh-who's there?" She stuttered. She tried to say the words with force, but the second she opened her mouth she heard more sudden movements, scaring the wits out of her. She placed her hands on the wall and slowly begin to stare at the intruder.
"GRRR... !"
"AAAAHHHHH!"
November 1st, 7:00AM
KB Security

Detective Dick Gumshoe walked over to the body of Wendy Oldbag. She was cold, just as every other person Gumshoe looked at. There were no signs of bullet wounds, stab wounds, or any sign of the victim being physically harmed. Gumshoe scratched his untidy beard and noticed a fallen jack-o-lantern a couple of metres away from the body. He called over one of his subordinates and handed down orders.
"Okay pal, I'm not sure if this was a murder or not, but something's fishy. I need you to prepare the body for analysis, and retrieve that lantern, as well, pal. There's not much else we can do now, forensics need to pull this place apart."
November 2nd, 9:00AM
Phoenix & Co. Law Offices

Phoenix's phone rang loudly as he entered his office, Maya tailing behind him talking excitedly to Pearl.
"Guess what, Pearls? Today's the day I finally let you water Charlie! Charlie was sis' favourite plant, so you have to make sure you special care."
"Oh, that sounds so exciting, Mystic Maya. I'll fetch the watering can!"
Phoenix picked up and phone and answered. "Hello?"
"Hey Nick, how are you!" The phone buzzed. Phoenix stared blankly at his phone while he tried to register the voice addressing him.
"Larry, is that you? The last time I heard from you was that murder case, what's up."
"Heh, yeah. Well this reunion is kinda along the same lines."
"You're suspected for murder... again!" Phoenix said in disbelief.
"Yeah, you'd think the amount of times it's happened they'd just let me go, but the Courts don't roll like that.
"I'd hope so, that means that the Court is doing its job," Phoenix silently muttered. "So, I guess you're at the Detention Center."
"Yep."
"And I need to come down and represent you as my client."
"Righty-o, Nick!"
"Okay, we'll be there soon." With a sigh Phoenix hung up his phone, and told Maya and Pearl about the news.
"C'mon guys, we have to go to the Detention Center."
"Sshh, Nick, Pearls is concentrating!" Maya snapped, turning her attention back to Pearls. Pearls was delicately balancing the watering can on the edge of Charlie's pot, ensuring the plant got enough nutrients by slowly tipping water into the soil below. Phoenix, rather bemused, waited until Pearl emptied the can and returned the watering can to its proper place.
"C'mon guys, I'll explain in the car."

Truality

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TAKE THAT! The evidence I'm providing for my entrance into this club!
You're in for the win!

That's amazing, Impo! Looking forward to more from you!

P.S: Discussion of the week seems more like discussion of the month, huh. Sigh.
This is my December . . .

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f i r e f l y .

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Why not write up a case for a roleplay of sorts? I saw one and it seemed really interesting, so maybe we could do the same as well. It doesn't have to be complex with investigating, but something simple like Phoenix v Payne in the beginning of the games. I think it would be cool. :D

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f i r e f l y .

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(Hmm, well I better play this carefully. One false move and it could be the end for the defendant.)

Well from what I've seen, usually the judge is the game master, meaning they're the one's who've created the scenario. They explain what's going on and what evidence to provide. People can then take part as witnesses, prosecutors, defendants, Dick Gumshoe and so on for a case. Apart from that it's all I've gotten so far. Witnessed would be allowed to make up their own testimonies and both sides would have to prove either guilty or not, depending on if they're the prosecutor or lawyer.

There would be things the witnesses would have to know, like what they were doing but from there everyone makes everything up.

Impo

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(Hmm, well I better play this carefully. One false move and it could be the end for the defendant.)

Well from what I've seen, usually the judge is the game master, meaning they're the one's who've created the scenario. They explain what's going on and what evidence to provide. People can then take part as witnesses, prosecutors, defendants, Dick Gumshoe and so on for a case. Apart from that it's all I've gotten so far. Witnessed would be allowed to make up their own testimonies and both sides would have to prove either guilty or not, depending on if they're the prosecutor or lawyer.

There would be things the witnesses would have to know, like what they were doing but from there everyone makes everything up.
We could totally do that, but I'd be two people, just to make it easier for the defence (they're meant to win, aren't they?)?

Would anyone else be interested in this?

If anyone is, I'll show the current people needed, and then we can add more as we need them:

Larry Butz - (accused of murdering Wendy Oldbag).
[s]Phoenix Wright - (if you don't know his job why are you even here).[s] Kura
Maya Fey - (Same as above, but mostly there just to give tips to Phoenix via channeling and witty remarks). SomariFeyWright
Pearl Fey - (Just there for cuteness, but can also be an oblivious help). (Miss Doronjo)
Winston Payne - (Prosecutor for the case). (Alternative)
Judge - Overall game master. Knows everything, but you can still convince him otherwise). (Impo)
??? - (Not telling unless you want to be him). (Truality)
Detective Dick Gumshoe - (in charge of the investigation of the body, required to testify).

I will write all testimonies so they are beatable, but you may need to press them. If you decide to join I will cross of your character and you will recieve a PM regarding what to do and what you know. Please, keep all you know to yourself (etc, don't say it in the club).

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Well the defense would only win if they can prove the defendant not guilty.

Also if you change Payne to Franziska von Karma I'd be happy playing the Prosecutor. If not I wanna play Maya!

Also I didn't say you had to use Payne, but just one of those simple cases at first where Payne is the prosecutor and it's simple. :P

alisaie

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Oh gee uhm... I'm not sure if I can play any of these guys in character. We need Shawn. I'm definitely going to think about this. c:

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I chose Payne to continue with the tradition of him being the prosecutor in the first cases. Plus, it is a fairly simple one too.

SHould I put you down for Maya?
No you should put me down for Payne and then change it to von Karma so I can pride myself on being perfect because let's face it I am. :P

Impo

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Can you please fill me in for '???' I'm interested.
Will do!


No you should put me down for Payne and then change it to von Karma so I can pride myself on being perfect because let's face it I am. :P
Got it :D !

And if it wasn't obvious already, I'm the Judge

SomariFeyWright

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As Ace Attorney's biggest fan, the defense has only one demand.

*desk slam*

*zoom*

ALLOW SOMARIFEYWRIGHT TO BE A MEMBER OF THE ACE ATTORNEY FAN CLUB!!!!!

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Hardest part in a case, eh? I'd have to say, in all honesty, finding Spark Brushel's nervous habit. *sigh*

Signature made by Pandaprinzessin of Court Records.

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f i r e f l y .

Age 30
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Adelaide, Australia
Seen July 4th, 2020
Posted December 21st, 2019
4,258 posts
14.3 Years
As Ace Attorney's biggest fan, the defense has only one demand.

*desk slam*

*zoom*

ALLOW SOMARIFEYWRIGHT TO BE A MEMBER OF THE ACE ATTORNEY FAN CLUB!!!!!

_____________
Hardest part in a case, eh? I'd have to say, in all honesty, finding Spark Brushel's nervous habit. *sigh*



Why are you so desperate for getting into this club? Were you trying to get in so badly so you could murder Mr. Impo?

Truality

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As Ace Attorney's biggest fan, the defense has only one demand.

*desk slam*

*zoom*

ALLOW SOMARIFEYWRIGHT TO BE A MEMBER OF THE ACE ATTORNEY FAN CLUB!!!!!

_____________
Hardest part in a case, eh? I'd have to say, in all honesty, finding Spark Brushel's nervous habit. *sigh*
Well for the biggest fan you sure missed the 'way' to join the club.

And, what's your opinion about Impo's project? We'd like to know.
This is my December . . .