Fluorescent Artwork.

Started by Fluorescent Dinosaur October 31st, 2011 6:03 PM
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Everywhere.
Seen May 18th, 2012
Posted February 8th, 2012
82 posts
11.5 Years

dA link.

What a cool title right? I haven't drawn in a really long time, so this was sorta disappointing for me. I'm just trying to get back into drawing right now. I love critiques and such, cuz I'm all about improving. Though there are so many perspective issues (and more) with this I don't know if I want to hear critiques on this particular picture, haha.

Kura

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Age 33
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Posted August 24th, 2021
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Wicked!! Loving the style and the way it's coloured!!
As for critiques, I think you got it. Perspective is off in some places (along with minor structure issues.) Another thing you could work on is consistency with lighting direction, but with this it's very forgiving because it's something light, airy, and generally lit. Other than that it's very lovely <3

If you don't want critiques I'll edit my post and just wipe em out. I don't think they're anything you already know, though. I know how tough it is to get back into the groove after not picking up a pencil in a while (I certainly feel rusty at lifedrawing at the beginning of ever school year LOL) but it's nothing to ever be ashamed of <3

Keep up the awesome work!
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Female
Everywhere.
Seen May 18th, 2012
Posted February 8th, 2012
82 posts
11.5 Years
Wicked!! Loving the style and the way it's coloured!!
As for critiques, I think you got it. Perspective is off in some places (along with minor structure issues.) Another thing you could work on is consistency with lighting direction, but with this it's very forgiving because it's something light, airy, and generally lit. Other than that it's very lovely <3

If you don't want critiques I'll edit my post and just wipe em out. I don't think they're anything you already know, though. I know how tough it is to get back into the groove after not picking up a pencil in a while (I certainly feel rusty at lifedrawing at the beginning of ever school year LOL) but it's nothing to ever be ashamed of <3

Keep up the awesome work!
Haha, thanks. Don't worry about giving critiques! I don't mind. I didn't even notice the inconsistency of the light source, but now that you've mentioned it, I definitely notice it now.

Kura

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Age 33
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London, UK (orig. Toronto, Canada)
Seen August 30th, 2021
Posted August 24th, 2021
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Yeah, but remember sometimes it's okay to cheat it if it helps draw your eye up and around the focal point. Don't fret about it much but instead try to use it to your advantage. :3 People do it a lot with realism too, which is why sometimes realistic paintings are much more dynamic than certain photographs.

I'd love to see more. ;3 Renamon is a pretty sweet digimon too hehehe <333
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good quality :) i liked it
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