Darkness

Started by Solo_tremaine January 1st, 2005 9:49 AM
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Age 32
i live somewhere, that u cant see or find.
Seen May 1st, 2006
Posted April 4th, 2006
120 posts
18.4 Years
I am darkness,
I follow you areound wherever you go.
I touch you during your sleep.
I cause anything bad to happen to you.
Although there is a good side to me I cannot find.
theres one thing you should know,
just let me be alone


Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
1,912 posts
18.6 Years
^^; Well, it surely does explain what darkness is, so that's good. The last two lines seem as though they are referring to a single person who feels as though darkness is who they truly are. Since darkness is often referred as evil, or bad; the 'darkened' person wishes to be left in peace, to go about their ways. I thought it was short, but meaningful. Good job. ^_^

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Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~