Aws, this was such a sad poem! ;-; I think you spelled wants instead of want, but that was the only real spelling error I saw. ^_______^ I think though your poem expresses darknes that one seems it may be hopeless to escape, your poem was good. Keep it up! ^_~
~Kelsey
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Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~