"Hatred"

Started by Princess of Oceans January 3rd, 2005 7:21 PM
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Age 37
Canada
Seen February 22nd, 2005
Posted February 22nd, 2005
103 posts
18.4 Years
Hatred

I hate you life...
Always in the shadows...
Piercing my heart like a knife...
Bringing me to new lows...

Whispers of hatred in my ears...
Making me wants to never listen...
Exposing my greatest fears...
Causing the darkness to glisten...

Anger growing into hate...
Unsure of where to turn...
Looking out for my fate...
Love is all I yearn...
Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
1,912 posts
18.6 Years
Aws, this was such a sad poem! ;-; I think you spelled wants instead of want, but that was the only real spelling error I saw. ^_______^ I think though your poem expresses darknes that one seems it may be hopeless to escape, your poem was good. Keep it up! ^_~

~Kelsey
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(. (.` ♥ Kelsey

Now officially moving to a new name, with Steve's OK, I shall now be known as Mori Seirei. ^.~